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da guy vs. domino(domino)
Moderators: Loon E Lou, Kuhlerblynd, Battle Mods
ill bomb this ho put on some music n tae bo ya abdominal//
.com ya cranial lobe maniac flows da guy throws are abominable//
i can picture ya now... smokin fags wit blokes in drag //
dont provoke the mag ill leave ya broke in bags n toe wit tag //
50/50 chance like the flip of a quarter ta beat ya//
but i cant remember if i answered ya call-out or ordered a pizza//
defeat you wit lyrical- rage- n -blistering -hooks //
the british aint shit check any clerical-page -of a- history- book//
.com ya cranial lobe maniac flows da guy throws are abominable//
i can picture ya now... smokin fags wit blokes in drag //
dont provoke the mag ill leave ya broke in bags n toe wit tag //
50/50 chance like the flip of a quarter ta beat ya//
but i cant remember if i answered ya call-out or ordered a pizza//
defeat you wit lyrical- rage- n -blistering -hooks //
the british aint shit check any clerical-page -of a- history- book//
Listen, u Look Like Someone Smacked u On The Nut-With-a-Shovel ..||
ur 'Shit' Couldnt 'Elevate' if u Took a Dump-in-a-Shuttle ..||
No-One's Feelin Ya Shit, You'll Never Kill When u Spit-Lines ..||
u Only Had 1 Good Punch, Thats Why u Used The Shit-Twice ..||
Only Adding Another Loss Man, in This Battle u Aint Got Shit-To-Gain ..||
ur 'Bars' Are More Unstable Than Michael J. Fox's Zimmerframe ..||
ur Browline Gives a Whole New Meaning To a 'Blind-Summit' ..||
i'll End This With 'Fuck u' i Don't Need a Punchline-Fuck-it ..||
Expo's..
Used The Same Punchline On Two Seperate Occassions.
'Blind Summit' is Something On Roads. Where ur Coming To The Top Of a Hill So u Need To Slow Just in Case There's Cars Just Ahead.
ur 'Shit' Couldnt 'Elevate' if u Took a Dump-in-a-Shuttle ..||
No-One's Feelin Ya Shit, You'll Never Kill When u Spit-Lines ..||
u Only Had 1 Good Punch, Thats Why u Used The Shit-Twice ..||
Only Adding Another Loss Man, in This Battle u Aint Got Shit-To-Gain ..||
ur 'Bars' Are More Unstable Than Michael J. Fox's Zimmerframe ..||
ur Browline Gives a Whole New Meaning To a 'Blind-Summit' ..||
i'll End This With 'Fuck u' i Don't Need a Punchline-Fuck-it ..||
Expo's..
Used The Same Punchline On Two Seperate Occassions.
'Blind Summit' is Something On Roads. Where ur Coming To The Top Of a Hill So u Need To Slow Just in Case There's Cars Just Ahead.
AKA SCOTCH HALL, MOE MEIJER & MOMEIJAH.
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vote - domino
now i shall bless you all and explain why
Domino came alot harder and had better punches. His content was more creative and flowed better this was a short battle and there wasnt much to it...I've seen better from both of you btw
Da guy you're definatley getting better but you need to work on your rhyming and maybe get more complex with things. but i see major improvment in your writings so props to you for that and continue to battle cause you're getting good!
Personals - Da Guy
Punches - domino
Flow - Domino
Creativity - Domino
Entertainment - tie
Good Battle Boys
vote - domino
now i shall bless you all and explain why
Domino came alot harder and had better punches. His content was more creative and flowed better this was a short battle and there wasnt much to it...I've seen better from both of you btw
Da guy you're definatley getting better but you need to work on your rhyming and maybe get more complex with things. but i see major improvment in your writings so props to you for that and continue to battle cause you're getting good!
Personals - Da Guy
Punches - domino
Flow - Domino
Creativity - Domino
Entertainment - tie
Good Battle Boys
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drunken jesus
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vote - domino
even though i hate english people i think he got this, da guy you're definately showing elevation but you focused way to much on the rhyme scheme and it watered down your content to like one nice line and some filler while domino had a few good personal lines with a solid rhyme scheme too
even though i hate english people i think he got this, da guy you're definately showing elevation but you focused way to much on the rhyme scheme and it watered down your content to like one nice line and some filler while domino had a few good personal lines with a solid rhyme scheme too
Respect this, specialist, black, testing this and get ya necklace jacked
Your after name scratched up off my guestlist, party freak
You the type of nigga that'll hardly speak unless you spoken to
You throw a cold screw but sober up when I'm approaching you
At the same time we postin two niggaz on that ass
Thats gonna do what they supposed to do the limelight
Snatched away from you because its my night
Killarm' blaze hotter than twilight, you better get ya lines right
Half of these crabs cant even rhyme right
[Killa Sin]
Your after name scratched up off my guestlist, party freak
You the type of nigga that'll hardly speak unless you spoken to
You throw a cold screw but sober up when I'm approaching you
At the same time we postin two niggaz on that ass
Thats gonna do what they supposed to do the limelight
Snatched away from you because its my night
Killarm' blaze hotter than twilight, you better get ya lines right
Half of these crabs cant even rhyme right
[Killa Sin]
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~Symbolikull~
- Rhyme Dominator
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ive said before, your elevatin, but i honestly dont think you were ready for domino, i know i wasnt when i battled him. this was a pretty good battle.
Da Guy you tried to hit wit hard punches but you were jus swingin at the fences, it seemed like. nothin really connected.
domino your verse wasnt your best, but you got the job done, like DJ said you had some pretty nice personals and your punches were creative.
personals - Dom
punches - Dom
Multies - Dom
well you know where that is goin!!!
Nice Battle
Vote : Dom
Da Guy you tried to hit wit hard punches but you were jus swingin at the fences, it seemed like. nothin really connected.
domino your verse wasnt your best, but you got the job done, like DJ said you had some pretty nice personals and your punches were creative.
personals - Dom
punches - Dom
Multies - Dom
well you know where that is goin!!!
Nice Battle
Vote : Dom
i'll smack yuh with rage i force multis outta my ass to the page
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~Symbolikull~
- Rhyme Dominator
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- Joined: Mon Sep 25, 2006 4:19 pm
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- Losses: 16
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~Symbolikull~
- Rhyme Dominator
- Posts: 2799
- Joined: Mon Sep 25, 2006 4:19 pm
- Wins: 37
- Losses: 16
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