twilight zone

[drunken jesus]

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when i'm bombing ya speakers its a godly procedure
i start talking in reverse with decrepid trendsetting suggestions
obsessing over my strength similar to mythological creatures
insane on wax i lay a track with raw insulting reverb
sickening nigga thats shifting ya inerds so try & play me black
end up lay flat with an incision stricken carcass for acting cynical nigga
i can't get into you niggas cause it sounds like dicks been into you niggas
i'm the main biblical feature you're a lame pitiful weak herb
i'm the reason priests believe in jesus the collosus sized monster
thats hauling off with a mobstas vibe to stomp you guys
'till you bawl in fright so what you got a ninei got rockets lined
to leave you sodomized so if you wanna try and get me off my grind
better get ready to duck motherfucker cause when i haul off and strike
with my arms the size of ya mommas thighs you'll remember all of ya life
the nigga thats known as the raw don of hype
who'll turn ya sorry life to columbine damn near all the time
my tracks are five mic prone an unbelievable level
the realest of rebels i made a deal with the devil
knowing he'd never find my soul so bye bye homes
go fuck yaself with ya steel and ya metal
writing ya drive by poems you ain't nearing the level
of this fly guy known to chill back and light nice dro
'till hes in a high fly mode not stressing a second
descending into the twilight zone

[complexity]

This was pretty creative. Obviously very good usage of vocabulary. I actually did lose the flow more times then in a normal verse from you. Though the multis were still slick.

As always some very quotable lines. That first one would have to be one of them.

Good to see you writing a little more again. Well at least showing us your writtens.

[~*Blitz*~]

Definatley creative, It started off with a bang as well. You are very talented lol. But this you know - I enjoyed reading your shit, your vocab is huge!!

It'd be cool to see more from you, your stuff is always worth the read

[drunken jesus]

i've been studying ancient meditation methods and newer ones and been developing my senses to find a natural high, its worked to a point but i need to study and work more to find a constant happyness and feeling of ecstacy, basically what i've developed is a sense of ambition and contentment i can do whatever i want in full effort without feeling stress feeling on top of the world while doing so

so i'm going to be writing, recording, & producing alot more, with my insomnia i have more free time in a week then most people have in a month, so i'm going to be using that free time to develop my talents further and expand creatively, i've also got some other ambitions outside the realm of hip hop that i'm going to explore

[B-Bear]

i've been studying ancient meditation methods and newer ones and been developing my senses to find a natural high

seriously?

[drunken jesus]

yeah once you develop a method that works well with you it works like you wouldn't imagine, its like a heroine high 24/7 with a better sense of alertness and a general feeling of ecstacy it changes your whole outlook on life

[16 Micz]

yea it was a bit creative but at the same time..some of the words flew right over my head...guess i need to expand my vocab...but anywho...the vocab, the multis, and as usual the rhyme scheme was dope...i liked this drop...it wasnt as deep feeling...as the other one and it wasnt boring either...so good shit keep it up..its good to see some people back to the scriptures...cause most of the shit lately has been wack..