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[align=center]"Not Juss a Business Man ..
i am Tha Business Man !! .."

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Yeah Mamii U Was Tha Shit, Now Baby U Tha Whole Sewer ..//..
Even if i Don`t Wanna Do Sumptin` i`ll Never Say No To ya ..//..
Upgraded To a Queen U Look at ya Chick Like She another Hoe To ya ..//..
When We in Tha Mall, i Give Her an inch She Try & Take Tha Whole Ruler ..//..
all Them Shots They Sendin` at Us, Lemme Go Through ya ..//..
Mamii U ain`t Never Met a Nigga This Sharp ..//..
They Go Tryna Do They Math & Figure His Chart ..//..
But Since i`m Single Now, ma` We Could Mingle Now ..//..
& if U Like to Show Skin, Them Vickys?? Quickly Bring`em Down ..//..
Mah Name ??.. i`ll Make U Sing it Proud, Quick to Show U Wat Them Things about ..//..
& Gurl, That ass On U, Make Me Wanna Get in Back Of U ..//..
No Pumps around ya Boy, So No i`m Not Gassin` U ..//..
i`m Doin` Wat i Have to Do, Wit Me, We, Could Smash & Cruise ..//..
From Skateboards 2 Scrapers, & in Tha Range Wit Dubs ..//..
She Wanna Play Wit Love, "Grind is Fresh" U Can Say i "Skate Wit Dove" ..//..
She Don`t Play Wit Scrubs, She Want a Kid To Ride ..//..
She Want a Nigga to Get a Grind, Lookin` Sharp in a Suit So She Can Fix Tha Tie ..//..
She Be Braggin` about Tha Shoes i Brought Straight From Steve Madden ..//..
i Check Cheddah, When i Got Tha "Watch Face Blue" Lookin` Like it "Sees Sadness" ..//..
When i First Met U, U Had Basic T.V, if U Leave U`ll Have Tha Worst Cable ..//..
Keep U in Designer Clothes, `cus U Mah Baby, Tha Birth`s Stable ..//..
She Swiped Mah Card, She Like it Raw, "Extra Credit" appeal, Mamii i Could "Upgrade U" ..//..
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i Check Cheddah, When i Got Tha "Watch Face Blue" Lookin` Like it "Sees Sadness" ..//..
When i First Met U, U Had Basic T.V, if U Leave U`ll Have Tha Worst Cable ..//..

dope shit..idk if its just me, but u really remind me of jay z in your writtens..this was definitely a dope one...cause not many people touch on topics like this..the rhyming, the flow, the creativity, and as always the lyrics were dope so keep it up..

by the way that beyonce upgrade u track is dope as fuck

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Post by complexity »

this piece was more like jay z then his others ones, ill leave more feedback soon
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16micz ridez pee-pees but complexity is correct sounds
shades of jay i liked it nice drop
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Post by Momeijah »

i Agree With The Others n i Was Listenin 2 Jay-Z When i Was Readin This And Yah, Similar Delivery.

She Wanna Play Wit Love, "Grind is Fresh" U Can Say i "Skate Wit Dove" ..//..

^Lmao Oh Shit, i Loved That Line, Makes a Fuckload Of Sense 2 For Somethin That Coulda Easily Been a Half Ass Forced Metta So Word.

So Dope Drop, Keep it Up Lol.
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GoodLookin` Out Y`all ..
i`m Lovin` This FB ..
Keep it Comin` ..
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