Will I Get To Heaven?

[Lawgix]

it'd be a sight to see grammas eyes
havent thought of prayin since gramma died
i know when she cries it rains
i got no choice but to defy tha pain
dont know how i could put coke before Christ
blew a line and begged to be forgiven tha same night
im not religious far from a holy man
i can picture Christ with spikes through tha palms and "holy" hands

that was a tight drop man flat out... really felt it n whats even stranger is when i was readin this a commercial about God came on weird what a coincidence lol PEACE BR0

[~*Blitz*~]

Yeah, I liked this drop alot - Its awesome to see a diffrent kind of writing from you and I wish youd drop more shit like that...Its deep and actually tells alot more when you think about the words.......dot dot dot lol anyway, good job JJ

[-TraMaTiK-]

yo this whole piece was nice jj...definetly felt it...nice man..props..a change from guns 2...nice -1-

[SlickMex]

Nice drop..deep meanin..Like to see more of this..

[*.HarleQuin.*]

i liked the whole concept , and i could feel the emotion a little bit
but i also think u could have worded this a little better for easier comprehension and to add a little complexity and depth to what ur saying, other than that keep em comin = )

[precise]

yea it was very straight forward, i think it was aright. the concepts were all kinda played to be honest but its not a problem, decent for a distilled drop lol good shit bro

[drunken jesus]

probably god loves ugly

[Lawgix]

btw... wb DJ

[MesaR]

yea it was good.

[Spoof]

dont know how i could put coke before Christ
blew a line and begged to be forgiven tha same night
im not religious far from a holy man
i can picture Christ with spikes through tha palms and "holy" hands
^^^^ my fav piece of it

nice poem dawg, I was feeling it, keep dropping!