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complexity: Impersonators

Post by lunathecursedangel »

my raps bring extremities, but to advance to sell//
i dont go to clubs, i'll wait and dance in hell//
i'm not down to earth, i'm watching it like a satellite//
when ur owner says get-em, check it dog...i'm that cat-ya-bite//
disaster strikes, when this word master-writes//
I elevate... to faster-knifes, to pass-your-types//
i'm soliciting a free condition with witty precision//
you want creative lyrics or watered down rap its a easy decision//
you-listen, to a new-edition, to feed ur minds nutrition//
true-addiction, thru-spittin, I should be ranked twenty but the two's-missin//
these critics should learn-math, before i quit rap and turn-back//
all the mainstream publicity you should earn-that//
free-written, you've never seen because of re-striction//
a true mc-spitten, our backs hurt cuz of all the dirt we-liftin//
who should be signed, dzk, ekoms, all killah, rot, noto, and tonedeff//
but some rappers have more marketing then phone-sex//
i don't do much audio, but who could come near-the-text//
thought i had sonar but i even hear-the-death//
2 pac screaming, don't fear-the-left//
in basketball you wouldn't cheer-the-ref// (no talent)
i do this shit all day, dedication-it-seems//
check it...rap is my meditation-in-dreams//
so addicting its medication-to-fiends//
i feel bad for all the led-wasting-teens//
look at the lyrics developing, as we are aging//
each bar raging, the phpbb is amazin//
cant take away-pride, my achievements, stay-high//
i bring more rockets then houston play-by//
and bring more ridicule than a gay-guy//
my confidence is to the sky but i wont say-why//
so as you listen to these mainstream artists//
and i really hope the song-skips//
just remember its part-his//
but lyrically established they cant accomplish//
its funny these rappers who sell-dumb-rap (seldom)
only talk about guns, wait till the shell-comes-back//
i give props, its great how well some-act//
but other then that, you couldn't give a bum-crack//
ok, still blazing, and you know i flow-well//
i have more dayz-inn than the hotel//
is it just me or do you only have fakers-into-you//
the only ja-bar i want to hear is an old Lakers-interview//
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Post by Adept »

true-addiction, thru-spittin, I should be ranked twenty but the two's-missin pretty nice line

this was cool not a lot of direction but it was pretty good for its style
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Post by Anonymous »

nice shit, I liked the ja-bar line at the end, good finisher.

overall though good multis and flow, and the twists of words...always love that shit.
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