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Borat · Post by **Borat** » Wed Nov 08, 2006 4:38 pm

Finally!...i did it, i cracked the alphabet, scrambled it, and served her "love" for breakfast...in bed, she would find my heart beat and bob her head to the sound, like a new age love song

Gone by sunrise to catch the morning train...these day dreams of me and her, defer my chance to catch a wink of sleep

so its off to work to get that pretty pennie she always asked for... maybe it will be my lucky day, i'll go home and say..."i brought home the bacon...now kiss the cook"

such a long day, but don't worry...i somehow find humor in the fact that the "Nights still young" and we're still here "growing older"...ha, well at least we're 'together'

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complexity · Post by **complexity** » Wed Nov 08, 2006 4:44 pm

creative

Borat · Post by **Borat** » Wed Nov 08, 2006 4:46 pm

yes very

drunken jesus · Post by **drunken jesus** » Wed Nov 08, 2006 4:59 pm

not really too creative or innovational, looks like something slug would write if he didn't rhyme

Borat · Post by **Borat** » Wed Nov 08, 2006 5:01 pm

compared to slug...good enough for me

drunken jesus · Post by **drunken jesus** » Wed Nov 08, 2006 5:07 pm

his rap songs, not his spoken word lol

listen to some spoken word artists, you don't really write shit in poetic form, its just random stories that don't rhyme

peep buddy wakefield, hes on sage francis' label, hes dope at spoken word shit, eyedea's pretty nice with it too

Borat · Post by **Borat** » Wed Nov 08, 2006 5:17 pm

yes yes...buddy wakefield...i follow all of them...heard of Saul Williams?...good stuff

drunken jesus · Post by **drunken jesus** » Wed Nov 08, 2006 5:20 pm

of course

Borat · Post by **Borat** » Thu Mar 08, 2007 8:16 am

for sam!... haha enjoy i figured i would help you find it haha

LadySam · Post by **LadySam** » Thu Mar 08, 2007 10:02 pm

Finally!...i did it, i cracked the alphabet, scrambled it, and served her "love" for breakfast...in bed, she would find my heart beat and bob her head to the sound, like a new age love song

Gone by sunrise to catch the morning train...these day dreams of me and her, defer my chance to catch a wink of sleep

so its off to work to get that pretty pennie she always asked for... maybe it will be my lucky day, i'll go home and say..."i brought home the bacon...now kiss the cook"

such a long day, but don't worry...i somehow find humor in the fact that the "Nights still young" and we're still here "growing older"...ha, well at least we're 'together'

i copied the whole thing coz its jus awesome..make more of these plz i enjoy reading them

=O i frickin love this! 10 outa 10!!
short simple and lovelyyyyy
i read it alot wen im bored it makes me smile
<3 excellent job jesse

Borat · Post by **Borat** » Tue Mar 13, 2007 7:58 am

Greatttt... feedback, i will make more just for you haha... give me a topic and i would be glad to write on it... im kinda dead with topics, haha sooo find me one and i would be happy to write =)

precise · Post by **precise** » Sat Mar 17, 2007 2:30 pm

lol coulda swore i left feedback on this ages ago

but anyways, shit was dope as hell

i loooved this line:
so its off to work to get that pretty pennie she always asked for... maybe it will be my lucky day, i'll go home and say..."i brought home the bacon...now kiss the cook"

so many diff refernces in it

good shit man, as usual haha

Borat · Post by **Borat** » Sat Mar 17, 2007 4:25 pm

haha thanks man... i got a shit load more... i just got my net back on sooo you all will be seeing alot more of me... and that is probably the best thing that could happen to your lives... =) lmfao...

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