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~*Blitz*~
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I liked this drop when u showed it to me in messenger, its put together well and the content is good. good work!

im killin clean so ill make ya neck glisten
tha forecast is rain with a blade to ya throat so ya betta listen
ridin caddiz fuck tha porsches
5-0 never gonna find where tha corpse is

^^ fav part
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Post by Lawgix »

yeah it was okay... still gun talk lol... but i saw u added a knife... so its all good... keep droppin
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Post by B-Bear »

guns, guns, guns.. try and rap bout somethin else.. lol.. it's gettin kinda boring to always read about ya guns man.. the content was okay tho, but u mixed up ya flow a bit too often.. try and make that better.. keep droppin man! lookin forward to be readin bout somethin else then guns..lol..
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Post by Momeijah »

tha forecast is rain with a blade to ya throat so ya betta listen
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Yah it Was Pretty Decent Overall ur Structure n Multis Are a Lot More Accurate Now. Try With More Creative Lines Like The 1 i Pointed Out, n Keep Droppin, Peace
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Post by Spoof »

Domino wrote:tha forecast is rain with a blade to ya throat so ya betta listen
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Yah it Was Pretty Decent Overall ur Structure n Multis Are a Lot More Accurate Now. Try With More Creative Lines Like The 1 i Pointed Out, n Keep Droppin, Peace
^^^^word, it flowed pretty well though
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URKMAN
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Post by URKMAN »

Nice Very Nice
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Post by -TraMaTiK- »

it was ight jj..i seen better from u tho honestly...overall nothin krazy gud,but it was ok...try takin time with the concepts tho..seems like u rush with em sumtimes...but it was ight tho..-1-
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Post by SlickMex »

man idk..it was ok..i just think guns n shit like that is played out..
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yea yea
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Post by urbanhistory »

SlickMex wrote:man idk..it was ok..i just think guns n shit like that is played out..
^^ other than a few lil things here and there flow was on point
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