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Post by *.HarleQuin.* »

Ur Gonna Regret it

U need to realize without me you wont go far
Lol who do u think u are?
I made u a fuckin star

Always coachin u through all the haters when u wanted to stop
Commenting and analyzing ya latest drop
We was "most incredible" so how could we ever flop?
But it's time to cut you out like clickin resize and crop

Ur cutting ur life short stupidly like euthanasia
And free yourself I retort continuously like fanatasia
I was down to ride for u, not to do tricks and amaze ya

Made your decisions and now u wanna make revisions
I wont do it, my heart cant take anymore incisions
Maybe I'm tired of our endless fights and personality collisions

Swear u ballin but ur pussy ass moves show u possess no balls
Sacrifices, frustration, bullshit, and heated phone calls
Rekindle us??..maybe the day ur pride falls

Lol ur so busy, u have so much to do
Wonder what is so important to u
Maybe I would be more important if I was in ya skate crew

Remember when u met me, that ruthless chick??
Made me a lil nicer I must admit..but now I can honestly say u make me sick
Wanna shoot ur face off, fuck ur shit up, maybe even chop ya dick
I'm erasing u completely not just changing my 'nick'

But instead of being satisfied by u laying in a ditch
I'm back on my I dont a fuck,on that every body hates this bitch
So everyone get used to it, and I dont give a fuck keep runnin ya trap like a snitch
Stop worrying about my life, and work on that computer fiend itch
Laugh all u want, u wont to get to me, non existent anger that wont make me twitch

I'm not gonna lie right now, act like were cool and wish u well
But I gotta thank u for ushering my heart back in it's shell
Not pouring my heart out, just lettin u know this chick is mad as hell

U didn't break me, just corrupted the silenced bitch in me
Done makin sure u see the things in yaself only I could see
Ridiculous is, the only time u listen is when I write a key

I'm not stopin my life for u, could break me but I wont let it
Trying to tell u how fucked up u are, but u just dont get it
But like I sed cant sweat, wont fret it, cus in the end ur gonna regret it
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Post by Momeijah »

Lol This Was Pretty Fiery.

But I gotta thank u for ushering my heart back in it's shell
Not pouring my heart out, just lettin u know this chick is mad as hell
^ Lines That Stood Out. No Hate 2 Either, But it Was a Cool Drop, Emotion Was There The Whole Way Through, Flowed Nice With Some Multis 2. Keep Droppin ur Gettin Better at Creativeness. Peeeace
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Post by Spoof »

yeah the emotion part worked really well, it flowed nicely and it was interesting!

U need to realize without me you wont go far
Lol who do u think u are?
I made u a fuckin star

Always coachin u through all the haters when u wanted to stop
Commenting and analyzing ya latest drop
We was "most incredible" so how could we ever flop?
But it's time to cut you out like clickin resize and crop


Swear u ballin but ur pussy ass moves show u possess no balls
Sacrifices, frustration, bullshit, and heated phone calls
Rekindle us??..maybe the day ur pride falls

^^^^ liked these lines tha most, props!
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Post by *.HarleQuin.* »

thanks for the feed guys
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Post by LadySam »

woahhh baby!!! that was on fire!

We was "most incredible" so how could we ever flop?
But it's time to cut you out like clickin resize and crop

i think that was the most creative line ive seen i love it

keep it up sammy
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Post by Lawgix »

this was dope sam... flat the fuck out... the emotion was off the charts... one of the best poems u've wrttin in my eyes... it was awesome... i had alot of fav lines in this...

but u killed it with these lines

Remember when u met me, that ruthless chick??
Made me a lil nicer I must admit..but now I can honestly say u make me sick
Wanna shoot ur face off, fuck ur shit up, maybe even chop ya dick
I'm erasing u completely not just changing my 'nick'

But instead of being satisfied by u laying in a ditch
I'm back on my I dont a fuck,on that every body hates this bitch
So everyone get used to it, and I dont give a fuck keep runnin ya trap like a snitch
Stop worrying about my life, and work on that computer fiend itch
Laugh all u want, u wont to get to me, non existent anger that wont make me twitch

great job harlequin hope to see more like this from u... even if its not about the same subject cause i could feel where u were comin from... newayz nice shit girl... keep it up

peace!
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Post by *.HarleQuin.* »

thanks everyone!! uppin for more feed
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Post by ~*Blitz*~ »

wow girly, that was an eye opener i would say. Awesome drop and you did a kick ass job getting your points across. The wording is dope. Lots of emotions and such, nice drop girl <3
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thanks girl and everyone else..more feed is welcome!!
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