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Batman - A Deeper Side

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Batman - A Deeper Side

Post by Batman »

I'd appreciate some honest feedback about this.

http://www.soundclick.com/bands/songInf ... ID=5042471



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P.S If u need fedback on ur audios just tell me
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Post by precise »

this is some good shit, i like the flow, lyrics were pretty decent in parts,

are you arab? i sorta detected a hint of an accent in there like subsist's
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Post by precise »

just checked out your other tracks

"ahh" is nice, im feelin the "guns up" track too, very dope bro, good shit
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Post by complexity »

I agree with precise. You do a great job of not having to much of an accent. The flow was great. The lyrics were pretty dope. I am impressed. Join the audio tournament. I'll check out your other stuff later
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Post by Batman »

the accent used to be a big problem for me when i started rapping but ive tried to get it better so people could understand what i rap about

yeah im arab



thanks for the feedback
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Post by Momeijah »

Yah i Liked it, u Pulled it Off With The Accent Nicelt n Flowed Well. Dope as Hell Lyrics The Whole Way Through, im Gnna Stream ur Other Songs Later. Keep Droppin.. Peeace
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this was nice man really felt it... good job keep droppin audios... peace
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