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~Symbolikull~
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Women are EVIL (at times!)

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Everyday it seems we Drift Apart, you say you'll leave me then it hits to Rip my Heart,
Outta my chest and this is Just the Start, of your actions and emotions that'll Flick the Spark,
Ignitin my Core, jus say it “Mike you're a Whoreâ€
i'll smack yuh with rage i force multis outta my ass to the page
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That my Love is Real, Im sorry I Couldn't make a Hug Appeal, to you, Ive done Enuff to Kill,
Our relationship but Somethin Still, makes me think you Wonder Will, you find someone new, we've Done that Deal

feelin that part the most^^^


Roles, makin Rights of her Wrongs, thru my faultz now im Writin this Song, while I keep dyin Inside as she Tries to Belong,

liked that part as well..^^

but overall mad nice dropppp dude..i can relate 2 it..nice..-1-
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thanx man for keepin it real

UppIN for FeedBack Please
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Post by Momeijah »

i Was Feelin it. Plenty Of Quotables n Even Tho it Aint a Style i Seen u Write in u Pulled it Off Nice, Nothin Seemed Forced And Multis Were Present The Whole Way Thru. i Coulda Related 2 That Shit Like 2 Months Ago Lol So Yah u Hit it Good. Peace
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AKA SCOTCH HALL, MOE MEIJER & MOMEIJAH.
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i liked it when u showed it to me in messy, its some deep as shit and its a crazy drop. You stayed on topic well - good job though its kind of a shitty subject
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Post by ~Symbolikull~ »

thanx sammy... you know the deal about it.

UppIN
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Post by Stina »

Your words are bitter & cold than December wit Snow, enuff to Sever a Soul,
its like I wait forever to know when the Endin will Flow,
^ best part in my opinion.
good writing, lotta emotions an shit up in it, deeeeeeeep


oh an im surprised viral hasnt agreed yet ;D lol
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LOL @ stina...give him time and he will he prolly just aint seen it yet
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Post by ~Symbolikull~ »

thanx for the feed Stina!!!!
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UppIN for Feed
i'll smack yuh with rage i force multis outta my ass to the page
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