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Lady And The Vamp Pt. 2!!!

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i Told Her i Had To Leave, Why? My Lips-Were-Tingling ..||
But i Said That i Had Things To Do, i Wasn't Risking-Missing-Things ..||
She Asked if i Was Coming Back To See Her Next Friday ..||
'Maybe, ill Talk Later, i Gtta Run Back To My-Place' ..||
Running Down The Lobby, But Visions-Still-Present ..||
'Blood in My Eyes' a Lease Of Life, Still itchin-To-Test-it ..||
Walking Down The Road, i Heard Something Behind-Me ..||
i Looked Around, it Was Deeana, Like a Ghost in The Night-Gleam ..||
She Asked Where i Was Heading To, And Where She Could Find-Me ..||
She Didn't Wnna Have To Wait Till i Came Over Next Friday ..||
She Went To Kiss-My-Cheek, Without a Thought i Started To Sink-My-Teeth ..||
She Tried To Shift-And-Scream, And Slumped To The Ground All Sick-And-Weak ..||
i Let Go Of Her, Bottom Half Of My Face Was Crimson-Coated ..||
Like a Blood Member From The Future, Deeana Was Quick-To-Notice ..||
Who i Was Now, Staring at Me, But Looking as Blank as a Corpse ..||
Nothing inside To Listen, And No Life, Was This a Change For The Worse? ..||
Lifting Herself Up From The Cold Stone, And Spoke With a Cold Tone ..||
innocence Robbed, Asking 'if She Was Not Able To Die No More' ..||
i Wiped My Mouth With My Sleeve, And Blamed it On instinct ..||
She Wiped My Cheek With Her Finger, Then Proceeded To Lick-it ..||
Let Out a Giggle, And Her Fanged Mouth Was Robbed-Of-The-Questions ..||
The Evil Side Had Awoken, But i Was Silent With Shock-n-Some-Tension ..||
She Laughed 'u Don't Need To Leave Now, ur Secret-is-Out' ..||
'So Come Upstairs And Use That Other Thing u Keep-in-ur-Mouth' ..||


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Post by ~*Blitz*~ »

OOOOOOOOOOOOO the ending is so NAUGHT! tre you should be ashamed!!

it was an intresting drop, i liked it but it was odd!! good STUFF...will there be a part 3?!
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OF COURSE LOL, IM NOT TAKIN CAPS LOCK OFF TY FOR THE COMMENTS DOREEN
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NAUGHTY**

YOU'RE WELCOME FERDINAND <3
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Post by B-Bear »

yeha, agree with blitz.. a bit of an odd drop, but liked it... but another thing that i noticed is that a lot of ya ulties didn't really rhyme.. u sorta typed the endig as a multie even though it was only the last syllable to rhyme.. can u explain it, something I missed?
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Yah its Not Very Lyrical, And i Usually Rhyme Shit in My Accent, (Eg. We Say World Like Weyld) its Fucked Lol But Thnx For The Feed Man
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Post by RH1NO »

VERY INTERESTING NNED A LITTLE THERAPY BUDDY?
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^lol...
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Post by B-Bear »

Domino wrote:Yah its Not Very Lyrical, And i Usually Rhyme Shit in My Accent, (Eg. We Say World Like Weyld) its Fucked Lol But Thnx For The Feed Man

aiit man.. forgot u were a brit.. haha.. no offense
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