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You play with my emotions like its some kinda game,
Your words set me on fire and then extinguish the flame/
It wont be much longer until I reach the end of my rope,
Then take a dive face down losing all hope/
As I sit here and pour my heart out to this note pad,
I cant help but feeling like you don't realize what you coulda had/
I woulda gave you the whole world and treated you like a king,
Don't tell me you got feelings for me when I was just another fling/
Constantly preaching to me that you're one a kind,
But with all the bullshit and lies you aint any different from any other guy/
My heart bleeds for the need to get this off my chest,
I'm feelin stressed and depressed but I got one last request/
When the thought of me crosses your mind,
Don't regret what you left behind/



Comment my shit you fuckers! =) Input on my writings are always appreciated!!
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i like this no wonder ur a rhyme master haha newayz great shit to a not-so-great subject... but i'd give it a 7.5 outta 10! good goin i'd like to hear it on audio... maybe we'll lay it down when i get there who knows haha newayz good drop hun!!! peace!!
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Post by Stina »

well i can tell someone was pissed when writin this. haha those stupid men. i personally liked it, i can relate an how you wrote it was good.

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Your words set me on fire and then extinguish the flame/"
best part in my opinion :]

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eh, i didnt feel this Drop At all to be honest...

I Only Liked Your First Bar..
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..Fuck that gay shit you say on a beat..
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HOW do women know these things? GOD
Don't Let The Game Make U, Make Urself

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Post by precise »

Lawgix wrote:HOW do women know these things? GOD
^^^^ its that sixth sense they have, kinda like how they automaticly know everytime you check out there ass


good drop blitze, keep at it n keep gettin your practice in
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fuck all these thespian frauds, they "bug me" like espionage
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Thank all you awesome people for the feed...much appreciated...

Uppin for more feed COME ONE YOU LAZY PPL lol
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Post by LadySam »

blitzzzzzz blitz blitzzzzzzzzzzzzzz
this shit was goood and yes like stina we can alll relate to it coz men r asshole and they can eat my ass plz and ty!
but no i loved this it was full of real emotions u culd tell it came from the heart
SAM ilu!
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HAHA ILU MORE!! <333 yeaaaa it did come from the heart and my emotions are jumping out of it...men do fucken suck i swear all there good for is making us cry and want to kill them lol....they can kiss my ass to =)
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~*Blitz*~ wrote:men do fucken suck i swear all there good for is making us cry and want to kill them lol....they can kiss my ass to =)
pfffffffffffffffffffffff hahaha, i dont agree with the first part cause i dont make women cry, but yes im EXCELLENT at the second part, im a MASTER of gettin women to want to kick my ass, no why?? cause its kinky n im tha fuckin CHAMP, lol shit precise is sleepy
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Post by *.HarleQuin.* »

blitz this was good..i know where ur coming from and why do the SAMS have a secret ILU<<<and me not know about it = ( ...
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=O sam doesnt no about our secret ILU!!!!!!
you do nowwwwwww
sam ILU the mostesttttttttttttttttttttt!!!!
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Post by -TraMaTiK- »

As I sit here and pour my heart out to this note pad,
I cant help but feeling like you don't realize what you coulda had/

word^^^...i liked that part the best 2 be honest..overall it had its nice lines and it was heart felt..nice job Sammy..keep it up...-1-
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haha ty vince!! <3

SAM'S ILU THE MOSTESTESTEST!!!
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THE.FeMaLE.FiaSCO wrote:blitz this was good..i know where ur coming from and why do the SAMS have a secret ILU<<<and me not know about it = ( ...
^^^^ cause your the only threesam who hasnt left voicemail on my myspace, so you officially dont count!!!
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