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16 MicZ Finished His 1st ACTUAL BEAT!!!!!!!

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please keep in mind that i'm a beginner at this..i've started like a month or so ago..but leave some feedback and criticism please and thanks.
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Not 2 Shabby For ur 1st, u Should Try Makin Em Have Some Parts in Between Like Effects And Maybe a Loss Of Bass n Some Kicks But i Liked it And it Would Be Good With Some Lyrics Over it So Word Lol
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Lmfao im Domino Btw, i Forgot i Was On This Name
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lol yea good lookin i was just about to ask..
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not bad man...some of the shit sounded a LITTLE off...n other things coulda stuck out more...keep it up tho
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like the melody, don't like the snare sounds a lil stiff, the breakdown/hook could use a melody change-up, or something else, beat needs a bassline too, but not bad young grasshopper prob. the best beat i've heard on here that wasn't done by me
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Post by complexity »

Can people use this micz?
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yea idgaf it was just a pratice beat...free to be used..stop plex ur making me blush
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the real question is....
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would people actually want to use this?
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Post by Viral »

if it was sent to me n i could change certain parts dat sound weird..lol n add a bit...then yes it would be used..haha
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