One Percent Away (ekoms+diss)

[complexity]

yo,I got infinite game, pimpin the fame
putting it down simple n plain since the instant I came
newspapers printing my name, the games beginning ta change
still spitting the same lyrically splitting ur brain
ripping the pages written insane rages ive havent slept in ages
so fresh n dangerous i got more rep then agents
threw away the tech n guages yet I kept my favorites
my intellect is amazing Im complex like inflation
the best in the nation anyone else is nothing less then imitation
how can i stress innovation, when I dont possess limitations
blessed as the greatest bringing death to you haters
careers arent stepping up like escalators
i will put an X through you fakers, whose the bravest
i dont want the old news I will only choose the latest
that means evils crews the safest n hate ta make this relationship
go to shit but the sovreign dudes are basic
three sams I suggest you retract all your statements
lady sam got wasted n decided she has ta hurt me
now shes getting a face lift and i aint talking her plastic surgery
shes thinking DAmn did he hafta burn me..thats half the story
guess whose back to bore me, ekoms can ur mom smack you for me
i dont understand why these other guys attack you poorly
you lack the glory that you earned at one point in time
ill annoint ur rhyme, boy ur lines could even disappoint the blind
n dont you dare diss a point of mine or ill dis-conjoin ur spine
who else is going to join the fight, ill smoke a joint to write
then storm the site faster then any form of light
im reborn tonight - sworn my life to the mic unlike precise
but i like precise its how i write, Yes, mics now ya bite off me
n put me on the record, you softy now Ill start the lecture
anyday Ill rip apart the jester with the illest architecture
see i dont hold confidence in anyone Im a smart invenstor
Im like a shark underpressure - aim at your heart
anywayz use your brain thats the only way youll remain on the chart
ur confusing my name when i say metaphorical
i mean in the sense of change youll be dead before you know
hence the name, i meant ta say, my intents the same
its just im taking over the game n now IM only 1 percent away

LINK

http://illestlyrics.com/board/untitled- ... t3846.html

[precise]

this was freaking dope

DOPE!

[~*Blitz*~]

wow that was some crazy ass shit plex....fucken fire!!

[NENO]

Damn Tom....I didn't think you had it in you...hot shit.

[complexity]

thanks for the feedback everyone

[MesaR]

woah..that was ill man...Good Work!!!

Why You Dissing Ekoms Anyways?

[complexity]

Just get him going. I dissed a few people. All in fun.

[TwIzTiD]

Tell ya tha truth plex, that was fia shit, but i didnt like tha end rhymez, put some more thought into it, double rhymez, throw a couple 3-4 syllable matchez into it, good vocab as usual, rhyme scheme was good overall, just not as deep as ya best man.

Still it was fia.

[Momeijah]

LoL Shit This Was Dope as Hell, Tons Of Quotables n Made Me Wnna Read it Again Lol.

[complexity]

thanks for the feedback. usually don't get this much. appreciate it

[~Symbolikull~]

and this is why i think you one of our top MC's Plex.
The Whole Beginnin was Dope as Fuck.... The Flow was there all the way, but some of your lines werent as good as your other one, but that happens when you write a long verse others stick out more than others. This really wasnt a diss though, more like self preservation, yuh know, you hadda couple disses in there, but honestly i didnt think that they hit that hard but acouple were nice..

yo,I got infinite game, pimpin the fame
putting it down simple n plain since the instant I came
newspapers printing my name, the games beginning ta change
still spitting the same lyrically splitting ur brain
ripping the pages written insane rages ive havent slept in ages
so fresh n dangerous i got more rep then agents
threw away the tech n guages yet I kept my favorites
my intellect is amazing Im complex like inflation
the best in the nation anyone else is nothing less then imitation
how can i stress innovation, when I dont possess limitations

NiceNess^^^^

guess whose back to bore me, ekoms can ur mom smack you for me
i dont understand why these other guys attack you poorly
you lack the glory that you earned at one point in time
ill annoint ur rhyme, boy ur lines could even disappoint the blind
n dont you dare diss a point of mine or ill dis-conjoin ur spine
who else is going to join the fight, ill smoke a joint to write
then storm the site faster then any form of light
im reborn tonight - sworn my life to the mic unlike precise

Only Real Diss^^^^

overall id give this an 8.9/10, jus cuz it fell off at parts, but it fire all the way thru homie..keep it up.

Big Ups Brotha

[drunken jesus]

to be honest the middle is the only part that was on topic, you could cut the beginning & ending parts cause they don't hold alotta relevance to the topic

the middle was pretty well structured the disses weren't the hardest but for just taking random shots it was pretty good the rhythm fell off a few times but not enough to take away from the piece overall

[complexity]

thanks again. it was meant to just be some random shots

[~*Blitz*~]

plex i just noticed that you have really nice eyebrows - they have such a nice shape lol!

[Momeijah]

He Looks Like My Old Next Door Neighbour Who Used 2 Masturbate a Lot. LMAO JK