.. Pretendin` to be Heroic ..

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[align=center]" .. U Tha Most incredible Babii .."

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".. Though i Can`t Let U Know it ..
.. Pride Won`t Let Me Show it ..
.. Pretendin` to Be Heroic ..
.. Tha`s Juss One to Grow Wit ..
.. But Deep Down a Nigga So Sick .."

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.... Pride Got Me Strong, But Tha Strength is Soon to Budge ..//..
Tall as Tha Highest Heavens ma` From Tha Length i Knew Who U Was ..//..
Tha Thought Of Losin` U Made Mah Heart Sunk to Mah Guts ..//..
in This World, all i Got is Mah Word & Balls, Musta Put a Shank to Mah Nuts ..//..
U Was Tha Great, & U Knew This Love, Wasn`t Fake, to U Love ..//..
Dang, i Shoulda Told U Was Hot More, Or That U Was Better Than Me ..//..
Listen Gurl, if it`s Me, Without U Then Penguin i`m Never Complete ..//..
i Seen Tha Future Wit Us, & i Seen U On another Level Wit Me ..//..
Dudes Wanna Tame ya Heart, i Tore Them Lames apart, `cus They Could Never Compete ..//..
Babygirl, i Never Meant to Hurt U, Or Made Mah impression as a Bad Dude ..//..
Yeah, i always Try & Stay Happy around U, Even if i Was in a Bad Mood ..//..
Pride Won`t Let Me Cry, But it`s Quick Enough to Show Me a Sad View ..//..
i ain`t Wanna Hang Up, it Was Tha Fact That Mah Pride Told Me i Had to ..//..
Boo, i Know i Fucked Up in Tha Past, & U Feel Like Mah Mess Was to Blame ..//..
as if Mah Keys Wasn`t Right, & Mah Text Wasn`t Tha Same ..//..
i Wanted to Put Mah Pride in Mah Pocket, & Snap Mah Neck For Tha Change ..//..
Tha Respect That i Made, Was None, U actin` Like i ain`t Support U ..//..
if it Wasn`t For Remy Martin, i`d Say U Was Queen Of New York Boo ..//..
i Don`t Even Smoke Or Drink, But i`m Sittin` Back Wit Yact & New Ports Too ..//..
When U Drove Off ma`, There Was Millions Of Thoughts Tellin` Me to Follow Tha Car ..//..
i`m So Sick Without U .. & Mah Pride i Gotta Swallow it Hard ..//..
& it`s Tough ya`Know But For U, i Know That i`m Losin` Mah Pride ..//..
Tryna act Hard, Hands at Mah Side Like Superman in Tha Night ..//..
U Hung Up On Me, i Didn`t Call Back, Which Means it`s Over ..//..
i Don`t Know How Else to Put it Mamii, So Sing it Hova ..//..

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".. Though i Can`t Let U Know it ..
.. Pride Won`t Let Me Show it ..
.. Pretendin` to Be Heroic ..
.. Tha`s Juss One to Grow Wit ..
.. But Deep Down a Nigga So Sick .."

.. i Fucked Up Gurl ..
.. i`m Sorry, When U Ready U Can Call Me ..
.. U Feel ??..
.. aiight One ..[/align]

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Tha Respect That i Made, Was None, U actin` Like i ain`t Support U ..//..
if it Wasn`t For Remy Martin, i`d Say U Was Queen Of New York Boo ..//<<fav line = )
this was good ...very mixed emotions..= (/=)

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ha Thought Of Losin` U Made Mah Heart Sunk to Mah Guts ..//..
in This World, all i Got is Mah Word & Balls, Musta Put a Shank to Mah Nuts ../


hot ass bar^^ nice emotion doe rell..really feelin it homie..stay up -1-

[16 Micz]

pretty dope, i know i dont leave u feedback too often so...


this was pretty dope i liked the concept and how u used jays verse, this actually seemed like something jay would do...

especially
Tha Thought Of Losin` U Made Mah Heart Sunk to Mah Guts ..//..
in This World, all i Got is Mah Word & Balls, Musta Put a Shank to Mah Nuts ..//..

that line was pretty dope too...as far as the topic it was pretty dope as well..it was something this forum isnt use to...it had some nice feelings and emotions im sure it would sound dope on audio as well...

but anyway good shit..keep it up, nice rhyming,nice multis,nice flow as usual

DP.

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GoodLookin` Out On Tha Feed Sammii .. Tramatik .. & Micz ..

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Uppin` Tha Thread ..

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[$hayne]

I Liked It.. it was emotional, Flowed Real good I'd Love to hear it as an audio

[MesaR]

yeah nice Famous Fiasco I agree With Tramatik
That Line Was Crazy ILL Sorta Mad My Balls Hurt Reading It lol

But Good Work Man..

[Irate]

Nice man, this is what I like to see.
Emotion..Depth..and Nice Scheme..
8/10

[Viral]

good shit man...i liked it alot....def had deep emotions n wat not....i think that girl should give u a call.........if she hasnt already...haha...stay up