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Where I Stand #12 - Final

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yo, yo, im back to conqueor the planet
like dinosaurs before the comet
controlling Asias entire continent
china - land of the communists
earth - land of the incompetent
see now the monkeys dominate
with his hairy palms,dropping bombs on it
its demonic but ironic my process is electronic
modernized sonets produced like economics
agnostic because religion is the death of knowledge
i wont accept any lyric that is less then flawless
my governments a threat they want me abolished
like Im islamic wanting this country demolished
and they confront me on numerous topics
i gotta be cautious theirs no logic in politics
pricks selling bricks to kids and we cant stop it
yet we can launch another rocket with empty pockets
dont snitch or talk shit youll be thrown off a bridge
n put on channel six these are the times that we live in
i saw a vision my rhymes were stuck in a prism
one mans wisdom turned me into a victim
what can i give him i must kill him for the children
hide their innocent eyes from them two buildings
im still feeling like his killings are unjustfied
just ta hide inside saviouring my pride until I die
the question is will i try to shoot through the sky
the truth is a lie, what will we do too survive

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Post by ~Symbolikull~ »

this shit was reel dope, and why do you keep sayin your an average rap writer. and you need to do some of these posts in audio, even if its shitty, fuck i posted mine up here and i suck.

n put on channel six these are the times that we live in
i saw a vision my rhymes were stuck in a prism
one mans wisdom turned me into a victim
what can i give him i must kill him for the children
hide their innocent eyes from them two buildings

^^^that was my favorite part, but the whole thing and the whole concept behind it was sick as fuck man


big ups
i'll smack yuh with rage i force multis outta my ass to the page
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"i saw a vision my rhymes were stuck in a prism
one mans wisdom turned me into a victim
what can i give him i must kill him for the children
hide their innocent eyes from them two buildings"

that was my fav part too
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thanks

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Post by Ambiguous Realm »

nothing outstanding.. ur not an average rapper but some things u drop r a bit average...the first couple bars seemed kinda eh.. w/e with the vocabs.. the first bar subsist quoted was my favorite.. everything else was watever..n dont tell me i never read ur shit
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oh rally
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