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Post by drunken jesus »

and i don't want you to get shit twisted kiddo

as a person i respect you i poke fun of you and even diss you from time to time in my battles but you still come in and drop honest feedback on my shit and on the real that shows integrity, as a lyricist or intellectual... not so much

as comical as it may seem at times i'm trying to help you i make money off simple shit i do on the computer i don't got the energy or time to waste in pointless arguments back & forth with you, the way you write will get you absolutely nowhere, it won't get you respect, it won't get you money, it won't get you bitches, etc. what you're attempting to do has already been done and is being done by 1000's of rappers, it simply isn't creativity... rapping like your favorite rappers will get you nowhere, look at angelous.... look at gorilla black

you need to demonstrate creativity in your lyrics because in text verses all you have is your words, you don't have a flow or delivery to help you so if your lyrics aren't creative and impressive they will get you nowhere and if people are telling you repeatedly the same thing you're doing wrong chances are they're RIGHT

make up what you want about me but i know what the fuck i'm doing, with little effort i make money off the shit 90% of the site does just as a hobby, and people online & offline realize i know what i'm doing, don't believe me? find a legitamate negative response to something i've posted in this section
Respect this, specialist, black, testing this and get ya necklace jacked
Your after name scratched up off my guestlist, party freak
You the type of nigga that'll hardly speak unless you spoken to
You throw a cold screw but sober up when I'm approaching you
At the same time we postin two niggaz on that ass
Thats gonna do what they supposed to do the limelight
Snatched away from you because its my night
Killarm' blaze hotter than twilight, you better get ya lines right
Half of these crabs cant even rhyme right
[Killa Sin]

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Post by B-Bear »

This is juss fuckin funny to read man.. I'm laughin my ass off!! hahaha

how bout changing this post to the comedy section or somthin.. cause it's reeeally makin my day.. haha..

hazard, I don't understand u.. why u sayn something, then whn people react to it, u twist it to make it eveen more fucked up? juss don't get it..
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Post by Mac »

Lol..Wow..Now I Wanna Move To Connecticut!

**calls grandma an grandpa**
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Post by Haz »

Come From Drew Careys Grandson ^^^

Aiight Drunken.. U Make Money Dats Good Do U..
N i Do Leave Honest Feed Back On ya Shit Even When U Be Dissin Me.... Whadd i Dont Undastand is Aiight U Dont Respect Da Way i Write itz Whuddeva But Why Stay On Me 24 7??... itz Not Lyke im Tryna Make Rap My Career Itz Juz Somethin i Came Up Wit N Do Fa Fun... Dont Matta if i Suck At it lol Cus Dats Just Me... N B Bear i Dont Undastand U Or Ur Lil Gay Ass Drops.. U Have No Room To Type To Me U Completely Suck Ass... Mac Just Cus U Can Text Multis Dont Mean Shit i Hurd Ur Audio N U Sound Lyke Dat Marshin From Looney Tunes CALM DOWN ...
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-.HaZarD.- wrote:$550,000 houses being hood
^^^ i Dont Even Live ina House
so you dont live in a house and you have 900+ posts from the same ip, great.
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Yall bring Drama to an Unseen Level
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Post by drunken jesus »

-.HaZarD.- wrote:Aiight Drunken.. U Make Money Dats Good Do U..
N i Do Leave Honest Feed Back On ya Shit Even When U Be Dissin Me.... Whadd i Dont Undastand is Aiight U Dont Respect Da Way i Write itz Whuddeva But Why Stay On Me 24 7??... itz Not Lyke im Tryna Make Rap My Career Itz Juz Somethin i Came Up Wit N Do Fa Fun... Dont Matta if i Suck At it lol Cus Dats Just Me...
if you'd notice i don't come at you 24/7 about it, i don't remember ever making a thread dedicated to you like complexity did, when you first started posting i posted the same comments in what you dropped and you didn't get the point of what i was saying so i just quit commenting, this is one of the first threads of yours i posted in in awhile, so don't feel special like i'm taking the time to make fun of you whenever i get the chance, i rarely post in my own threads in this section let alone yours
Respect this, specialist, black, testing this and get ya necklace jacked
Your after name scratched up off my guestlist, party freak
You the type of nigga that'll hardly speak unless you spoken to
You throw a cold screw but sober up when I'm approaching you
At the same time we postin two niggaz on that ass
Thats gonna do what they supposed to do the limelight
Snatched away from you because its my night
Killarm' blaze hotter than twilight, you better get ya lines right
Half of these crabs cant even rhyme right
[Killa Sin]

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