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4 Long Bars of Thought

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It's a Compulsive thought of the Last Devotion of an MC's Emotion that can Constantly cause Mass Convulsions,

Im Vast into Contortions twistin minds ina Instant Blast of Massive Implosions like a volcanos Eruption deep within the Ocean,//

Yall misplace the hate jus to Hate Me, cuz Im the sickness inside of you that'll make yuh liver turn black wit Gangrene,

Ill Filet G's and Tap yuh spinal cords jus to go Main Stream, Face Me cuz Im Chinese the way I kill cats jus to Gain Green,//

Infect a virus when I penetrate yuh Blood Stream, my “Passionâ€
i'll smack yuh with rage i force multis outta my ass to the page
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Im Vast into Contortions twistin minds ina Instant Blast of Massive Implosions like a volcanos Eruption deep within the Ocean,//

^^ really liked that line and the word play


Ill Filet G's and Tap yuh spinal cords jus to go Main Stream, Face Me cuz Im Chinese the way I kill cats jus to Gain Green,//

Infect a virus when I penetrate yuh Blood Stream, my “Passionâ€
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thanx blitz for the feed back i appreciate it....


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uppin
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