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Haz
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Aint Lyk Me

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Yall Some Fruits im Jus Fly U Guys Couldnt Tie My Mind
If U Errupt My Eyes Dicuss Suprise We Run Up U Die/
i Was "Rap'd" With a Gift i'll Have a Gash Out ya Lips
Handlin Heat Like Oven Mits Gun in ya Mouth lef with a Punctured Lisp/
My Neck Look Like a Dozen Crips i'll Gripp Tha Nina
Know Who u Fuckin With, Befo i Have U Crushed n Split infront ya Crib/
Ya Crew Sum Pussys U Da "Baddest Bitch" Like Trina
U Da Bravest Niggah Have ya Heart Infront Of ya Ribz/
i Dont Need Structure Brotha My Lifes Bricks Like Construction Sites
Fall Off Child U Da Type Gettin Jordans Autograph When u Touch Tha Mic/
i'll Stuff Up ya Thighs i Empty Ya Legs Fa Runnin Ya Muscle When My Crew Roided
Ready To Unleash a Beast Lyke Unstripp Tha Muzzle Whos My Nex Food Choice Shit../
dr.Azah Hazard Wit Coke Driftz "Catchez" O's, Kics So Sick if i Got Da Flu Ya Life Done
Start Flowin With Sickness U Losers Needa Run Tha Fluid Might Run Cross This Light Son/
i'll Pour Gas On My Legz Piss On Fire Den Aim At ya Face, Body U Get a "Ahh-Ohh-W'L"
Like Aim in ya Face U Lame in This Race Like Bad Comedians On Stage.. Da Only "CLIQUE"
U Really Got On Page , i'll Nail U Againzt Da Wall Lyke "A-TAC" Attack Squads-N-People
If U Lookin Fa a "Steel-Scene" i'll Cause a Rob-Ya-Sequel Laced Up Till He Blue Like Aqua Diesel/
Niggah Aint Move Unitz He Ain "Haz He".. Rappin About Bullshit But itz Hazzy Who'll Develope Beef
Handle U Ease Behind Bars Like Felonies..Bow To ya Savior *Fell-On-Knees* Im Da Bully/
i'll "TEACH-Ya" Tell On Me i'll Spread Shellz Of Heat U'll Smell Like Meat Freshly Coooked..
Yall Old Like Plane Ticketz im Freshly Booked With a Deadly Hook Speak Steady Shook/
Knowin i'll "SHAKE U UP" Like Harlem.. Fienin Fa a Beatin "Bake Um Up" Like Got Um..
Stop Um Seriously Not Even a "SIGN" Will..Raizin Chrome Only Time "Eye"(i) "Killed"
Shinin With Tone Combinin My Bones Slightly Grippin Bac Get Lef With a "Dirty-Disks" Like Skippin Trackz/
Last edited by Haz on Sat Feb 03, 2007 1:35 pm, edited 2 times in total.
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Post by -TraMaTiK- »

definetly seen betta from u...this was ok but u can do betta...-1-
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Post by -TraMaTiK- »

saw u added more on...the stuff u added on wuz alot betta..some parts didnt seem 2 rhyme..maybe cuz the structure or suttin idk...but its decent not bad...had sum multis here n there...few good punches..keep @ it -1-
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Post by Lawgix »

honestly how can u say this was better???
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Post by -TraMaTiK- »

cuz when he 1st dropped it..it was like 1/2 assed and he added more so its a bit betta
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