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another taste of meeee

Post by LadySam »

not as good as my first one but ill hve to get use to thinking hahaha

feedback? plz and thanks! <3



they all know they wana be me/
bitches playing liek they dnt need me/
so sweet so fine/ unlike all the females,
im actually a true dime/ climb, the mountain
high jus to desire me/ im on fire, u might as well
hire me/these boys thrive 2 be near me cuz they never
see a girl like me unless theyre watchin tv

got my cute nails and my long hair/ give them
bois something worth to stare/ they glare,
with them eyes of green/ bitch bounce back
u can never be like me/ see, im the lady
of all ladys/ ladysam, yea shes that
queen B/ i dnt come for free/ got ppl
paying to get a taste of me/ so fly
so sly, with a touch thatll make u high/
with them big brown eyes/ shinin like wow ill make ur pupils hit the sky
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Post by Viral »

its really good...ur damn good at writing..misses i dont write at all!...lol...im like the plot to this one...haha...keep it up....if u ever wanted to learn other styles to write verses get at me n wat not....
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haha thans i might take u up on that
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Ay Sam,U Plan on Doing any Audios?...If So Lemme Now Haha,.....Good Shit
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