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ok its my first verse ever..feedback plz and thanks
i dnt claim to be the 'illest'/ but ill make u shiver till ur skinless/
might be the joke of this site/ but at least my standards are at a huge height/
spite/ goes to every guy in this site/ king plex/ flexing like he got something to show/
'LadySubsist' had subsist on the up and go/ flow? i see none in his ryhmes/ this dude
worse than me and my first time/ shine/ is what im all about/ got 'men'
in here thinking bout me from time to time/ domino on the other hand,
can spit some good lines/ yea your right/ i think i lost my mind/
hazard always turning this into a bore/ for what im gna say he'll think im a whore/
did u find your girl stranded on the sea shore?/
samuri JK talking bout 'tapping that ass'/ the only thing he'll be
'tapping' is his mums water glass/ blast!/ is what three sams do to a site/
God u have all this attractiveness, illest must be doing something right/
Anyways I think this is tite!/ im out like a mutha fucker aight?
hazard always turning this into a bore/ for what im gna say he'll think im a whore/
did u find your girl stranded on the sea shore?/
^^ i'll Reply To Dat a Lil Lata
But it Was Decent Fa ya First Shit lol Cant Wait
To Catch U Sam..haha
