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battle that hasn't even got a response yet.

Post by Typeo »

Man I could kill you even if I was Butt Naked
One line and I beat this pussy so bad, he cunt(can't) take-it
You're gay, you can't get a real girl, so you fake-it
Paying a picture whore, man you're a weak bitch
I stay in your system n' last, you're just a meek itch
Been jacking off to much? Cause you reak of spit
Dirty, you cant even touch just stand don't sit
I lead you around with a bit, bitting down like your moms tit

Oops, guess you ain't to gay being attached to your mother
But you still give a whole new meaning to leaning on your brother
I'm the closest to a woman you got, since I hit below the belt
but I got a bigger set of balls than your whole weight, welp
I've already signed you up to RAINN to get some rape help
Fucker, you couldn't even twist my words if it was written on dental floss
You're forever stuck, shit, muck, with the dick tucked n' mental frost
You're definetly no Slim Thug, but you've been slaped down by the Boss

I'm not a gentle foe, you're low on my credentials Ho
so hot headed your vent'll blow, Stepping on you, you're a potential toe
I can get ladies like the Axe Commercial, you still gotta pay
You spill knowledge like a Infomercial, like Girls Gone Wild Play
weakest porn, weakest torn, so over lorn, so you seek the worn
as if you buy all your shit from Plato's Closet, poorly adorned

Slip n' Slide all over the place, your life time of work
Gathered it like oil from your face, cause you're more of a jerk
Got that twerk in your arm like rookie of the year, goin' berserk
Making bunk ass rules, so you switch them just for me
Shows how much you suck, really thinking you'll get a V
Boy, you're never gonna mature, You'll always be Wee
like nintendo, never able to pass on games like the new Wii
I break shit like the controler, cause you can't even grasp
Equal to toilet paper, cause even with Shit, you come Last.


I responded to Micz.
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Post by Haz »

Yo Typeo Wurr U Da One Dat Earsed my Feed
On Dis Link?
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Post by Typeo »

nope, I can't erase anything. And I wouldn't anyways, I don't care what someone says.
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You can write it up again if you want.
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Post by Haz »

Aiight .... But i Had Some Good Feed On Dis Shit N Sum1 Earsed it ..... But Aiight Like i Sed Befo

This Was One Ov ya Betta Pieces i Seen i Give U
Propz Fa Diz One ... I Dunno it Seemed Diffrent From All Dose Battlez U Showed Me Da Otha Day

"Man I could kill you even if I was Butt Naked
One line and I beat this pussy so bad, he cunt(can't) take-it "

^ Good Opener

" I'm not a gentle foe, you're low on my credentials Ho
so hot headed your vent'll blow, Stepping on you, you're a potential toe "

Dat Was Also Sumthin i Liked ^ ...
Yea U SHowed Potential in Dis Piece So Good Shit
Keep Droppin ...
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Post by Typeo »

Thanks Hazard. Yeah, I would say that I don't put as much as I should into most of my verses. This kid was really kinda pissing me off...so yeah...

I'm glad you liked it though man, I'll see if I can bring some of this shit to my battles here.

And to whoever did delete it, go suck a clit.
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LOL yea .. I THought U Deleted it When i Gave u Positive Feed i Was Lyke Woow... But it Wuz Good SHit So Keep it Up ....
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Post by precise »

youre shit didnt get erased dude, lol you probably posted and got an error, it happens with illest hahaha BLAME TOM!! lmaooo
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facin me? its mission impossible, like pickin up lesbian broads
fuck all these thespian frauds, they "bug me" like espionage
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Word Den Datz Whudd Happen if Anythin lool
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