Something I Wrote Quick.

MesaR · Post by **MesaR** » Mon Jan 29, 2007 2:46 pm

http://illestlyrics.com/board/post20827.html#20827
Battled Some On Rap Royalty He Hasnt Repiled Back.
That Site Is a Pure Shit Hole First And Last Battle Dere.

kid Ill Grab Ya Tounge And Leave You "Slow-to-Speak"..//
Cause You No My Punches Are Hot And "Ya-Flow-Is-Weak..//
Battling Sequence? Im Taking You As Not The " Smartest-One"..//
My Bars Are Red Hot And A Mac 10 " Isnt-The-Largest-Gun " ..//
Kid ill Leave Ya Commiting Sins And " Death-Sores-Its-Been-Spoken"..//
Put Me In Gunnies For Kicking Your Ass cause "The-Records-Been-Broken..
macc Ill Pump Shots and slash at Your Vitals And "Stain-Ya-Back..//
Cause Ya The Realest Gangster On The Net And You Acutaly "Claim-Ya-Black..//

~ sequence ~

Typeo · Post by **Typeo** » Mon Jan 29, 2007 2:51 pm

not bad, its about in the middle of the scale of good n' bad. Its not bad, its just a lil weak. Its decent though, not all of it is really multis. So it didn't need the dash's. But its got some strong points, about 1/3...

The 'My bars are hot' line, the 'grunnies' line, and the last line are my favs.

Haz · Post by **Haz** » Mon Jan 29, 2007 2:58 pm

i Think it Was Pretty Good Yo ...
U Had Metaphors N Stayed Flowin Wit Tha Multis
Propz ... Do U Kid

Fav Shit : macc Ill Pump Shots and slash at Your Vitals And "Stain-Ya-Back..//
Cause Ya The Realest Gangster On The Net And You Acutaly "Claim-Ya-Black..//

Borat · Post by **Borat** » Mon Jan 29, 2007 3:11 pm

this is fresh man... not bad at all, im not much for battle verses but for what it is... not bad keep it up "Kid ill Leave Ya Commiting Sins And " Death-Sores-Its-Been-Spoken"..//
Put Me In Gunnies For Kicking Your Ass cause "The-Records-Been-Broken.. " fav line

Mac · Post by **Mac** » Mon Jan 29, 2007 3:13 pm

macc Ill Pump Shots and slash at Your Vitals And "Stain-Ya-Back..//

I Know That Aint directed At Me..

complexity · Post by **complexity** » Mon Jan 29, 2007 3:27 pm

Pretty good man. I liked the first few bars the most.

MesaR · Post by **MesaR** » Mon Jan 29, 2007 3:27 pm

No Just The Guy I battled On Rap Royalty His Name Was Mac to

precise · Post by **precise** » Mon Jan 29, 2007 6:02 pm

sequence is still elevating, good shit bro, keep it up

Momeijah · Post by **Momeijah** » Mon Jan 29, 2007 10:16 pm

Word ur Gettin Better All The Time. Was Feelin This Piece. BUT ThaOneYouHate u Need 2 Stfu About Mettas Cuz They Go Over ur Fat Somalian Head And ur Standard Of Mettas is 'Chill Like ice'...'im Gnna Smoke u Like a Cigarette'..So Fuck Off Lmfao

|.R.SON.aLL.| · Post by **|.R.SON.aLL.|** » Tue Jan 30, 2007 2:11 am

kid Ill Grab Ya Tounge And Leave You "Slow-to-Speak"..//
Cause You No My Punches Are Hot And "Ya-Flow-Is-Weak..//

^^ .. Tha`s Mah Favorite Shit ..
Like i Told U On MSN ..
U Gettin` Better Fam ..
Solid Piece ..

$hayne · Post by **$hayne** » Tue Jan 30, 2007 2:53 am

Shit was Ill meng.. Nice Multies.

Akuma · Post by **Akuma** » Tue Jan 30, 2007 9:10 am

pretty hot spit af far as key'n and multies go.. this was aimed at mac?

MesaR · Post by **MesaR** » Tue Jan 30, 2007 10:34 am

No It Wasnt Amied At Mac lol.

LadieHazard · Post by **LadieHazard** » Wed Jan 31, 2007 4:44 pm

kid Ill Grab Ya Tounge And Leave You "Slow-to-Speak"..//
Cause You No My Punches Are Hot And "Ya-Flow-Is-Weak..//

Themz lines Was hot..i like readin ya rhymes i dont lose ma self readen em

MesaR · Post by **MesaR** » Wed Jan 31, 2007 7:23 pm

Thanks guys for all this feed Back couldnt be AnyMore Happy Thanks!

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