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Haz
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Smoke The Pain Away

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I See it in Your Eyes Your Scared Fearin Life For Me Clear With Time We'll See
if Ima Get Bagged Like You Sed, No One Cared Fa Da Kid No Crys if Dad Was Dead/
Now Your Diein im Down Just Cryin Unda My Fitted i Cant Picture U Lyin With Tha "Lid Fixed"
i Was Ya Kid Shit .. U Wished i Would Take U Out Of Hell Cause Heavens So Far N Now i Sell/
Tha Product Of Demons U in Da Process Of Leavin My Eyes Poppin Seein ya Caskit "Seamed-in"
Make Sure Cushion Under U Fa Ya Warm Heart..i'll Give My Whole Body Fa Ya Torn Partz/
I Love U N im Sorry When U Got Married Dere Was No Spark Divorce Startz Da Course Hard
Just Below Dark u Was in ya Own Arms But i Came N Brighten ya Life i Woulda Killed Him Dat Nigh/ U Sited Tha Knife.. i Seen U Drippin Tears i Know That "R.I.P" Is Near Not My Biggest Fear ..But
Why U This Shit Aint Clear ... So i'll Try N OvaDose On Some Drugz...Place My Picture On ya Stone/
U Can Have ya Olda Sonz Mug..U Did Fa Me So i Gave Fa U Head Blown Off U Sayin My Life Was a Gift Threw....i'll Miss U Cause Me Commitin a Sin Will Never Rest Who i Am With Demons Voices Guidin This Lifeless Man.../
Last edited by Haz on Mon Jan 29, 2007 11:37 am, edited 3 times in total.
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Daymn That shit was DeEep im really startin to Dig The Way u started Writen diffrent shit its nice Keep it up papi
Think iM Trippin? Tie Ma Shoe...
Cant Stand me? Sit the fuck Down...
Cant Face me? Then Turn the Fuck around...

u Cant Break The Bitch That Thinkz Nothin Of u!
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Post by Lawgix »

again it was nice... very deep n well put... but dun all ur poems look like raps lol... try to write it inna different style... its nice no doubt... but just the styles way off for a poem in my eyes...
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Ohhh Yea Aiight Den i'll Strt Switchin My Poem Style Up 2 ....
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