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Ambiguous Realm
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EkomS and Flaws

Post by Ambiguous Realm »

ok so earlier i checked out one of micz's topics.. and it kinda gave me this idea.. a few ppl think that i assume im better than everyone.. well.. haha.. ok so n e ways that's not the point.. i wanna know wat i lack in with a quick explaination .. i just wanna know wat u guys think and some areas that u think i need to improve in..dont hold the criticism back either...

btw.. i dont give a shit if u think im an asshole or arrogant and conceided..i want to know wat u think about me 'LYRICALLY'
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Post by 16 Micz »

what about a cunt? well lyrically id say you're lacking entertainment, just like plex, you write complex u write nice lines and shit but the average listener or reader doesnt want to hear the complex shit every line, i mean u have some understandable lines but ur topics can get a bit boring and when u go too far with your multis can be annoying..but u do use alot of nice creativity,wordplay, and multis, well thats just my opinion
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Post by Ambiguous Realm »

BITCH I WILL KILL U!!! lol j/k.. ok thx n e ways.. heard that before.. n e one else agree with 1/6 micz?
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Post by Subsist »

Yeah i agree with him , your lyrical skills are cool and your multis are cool but they get boring and your raps normally dont prove a usefull point
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Post by ~Symbolikull~ »

I like the usage of your multies and wordplay, you have mad vocab, which stems from the use of multies. your verses my lack some excitement, but maybe thats the way your write, i have nothin against you, and i think you are a very talented textin mc. keep it up your errogant fuck!!!!!LMAO
i'll smack yuh with rage i force multis outta my ass to the page
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