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Just a freestyle i did to a beat (i was bored)

Nigga Every Day I "Blast" "Hoez"But Ima Shoot You In Ya Ass And Claim It An Extra Ass "Hole"/
Wen My Shit Gets Outta "Contro" "Yo" You cant Tame My "Lyrical Flo""So"/
Wen I Smack You With Nine Bullets Ill Watch You Pull Up Ya Pantz And Lean Back Like "Fat Joe"/
Talkin About Blastin Of f "Shellz" Ill Send Ya To "Hell" Wen I "Blast" YOU! Wit Sum "Rap Sellz"/
Do You Understand "Me" "B"Na..U Must "See" The "Evil" In This Fucked Up "MC"/
Your Skills Is "Crusty" More And More Dises Are Going To Make "History" Dont Laugh Chum!"Seriously"/
Ima Send You Through The Orbits "Galaxie" Wen You Get Hit Wit "StreetCreep's" "Lyrical Legacy"/
You Think This Is "Funny" "Sunny" U Just Prostituited Yo Ass So Wheres My "Money"/
Ima Spread Ya Ass Like "Honey"/
Nigga Dont Cry Keep Ya Balance Stay "Steady" You Aint "Ready" I Scared You In Ur Nightmares Like I Was "Fready"/
Im Light I Flinstone So MR .Fag PLease Call Me "Beddy" While You Laying On The Ground All Chopped Up So U Must Be Shreddie"/
You Goin To Fill Me U With "Led" ..Is Dat So "Fred"The Only Time You Filled Me Was With "Semen" Wen U Busted Wit Cream and ended
up makin ya self look like a *yetti*/


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Post by complexity »

appealing name, made me want to read it, but i wont until you leave a link, thanks homie
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Post by Viral »

over all it was pretty decent...thebeginin was alot better u seemed to fall off towards the middle n end...ummm question


You Goin To Fill Me U With "Led" ..Is Dat So "Fred"The Only Time You Filled Me Was With "Semen" Wen U Busted Wit Cream and ended
up makin ya self look like a *yetti*/


is it me...or does that just not sound right at all?..im confused
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Lmao thx fa tha feed and yea it was sumthin randomly said haha
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LMFAO @ Viral ..
WOW !!! ..
Tha`s Mad Homo ..
& ya Structure Sucks ..
Like U Needa Change it ..
`cus it is Confusin` Sometimes ..
Work On ya Lyrics & Creative ..
Basically i`m Stealin` ya Title ..
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.. it`s S.a.W Bitches ..
.. Niggas ain't Fuckin Wit Tha Team ..

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Post by Mac »

Title Speaks For Itself, Your Bars Are To Long.
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