jay killah vs street creepa [- 3-4 Vote Up -]

MesaR · Post by **MesaR** » Thu Jan 25, 2007 1:46 pm

i agree with mac haha ova dose thats dick ridin man

|.R.SON.aLL.| · Post by **|.R.SON.aLL.|** » Thu Jan 25, 2007 1:57 pm

2-3 ..

Jay Killah`s Way ..
Ova Dose`s Vote Don`t Count ..
Basically Dick Ridin` ..

Tha Kulprit · Post by **Tha Kulprit** » Thu Jan 25, 2007 5:29 pm

Punchlines: ew...jay i suppose
Metaphors : come on ppl
Multis: if u wanna call them multi's jay
Wordplay & Nameplay : u 2 frustrate me, lol
Structure & Flow : <<biggest issue, find a way to get that
Personals : Street Creepa

overall - Jay

this battle was sad, and i feel dumber now having read it, lol, but yo on some real shit, yall needa gain a structure thats readable. everything else will fall into place...good luck in the future keep battling

fuck haters · Post by **fuck haters** » Thu Jan 25, 2007 5:34 pm

naw it was the style that fucked it up for me!

Tha Kulprit · Post by **Tha Kulprit** » Thu Jan 25, 2007 5:46 pm

lol listen young buck, u need any help get at me. i been spittin since i was 10, and when i started i was right where ur at. style n structure is 2 very different things, u needa work on both. u need a lil tip here n there me, and im sure a bunch of other ppl around here wouldnt mind it. all u need is some advice n guidance to help u build a solid structure, and your style is on you...keep workin at it tho...

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MesaR · Post by **MesaR** » Thu Jan 25, 2007 9:04 pm

LoL no it was ur punches multis structure flow name play word play that fucked it up for u

|.R.SON.aLL.| · Post by **|.R.SON.aLL.|** » Fri Jan 26, 2007 2:38 am

2-4 Uppin` ..
More Votes People ..

-TraMaTiK- · Post by **-TraMaTiK-** » Fri Jan 26, 2007 3:02 am

idk i really dont..its like listenin ta 50 and Ja bitch at each otha...idk....punches street i guess cuz i only saw sumthin resemble a punch wit da wu tang line...the other kid.............fuck it street one ta me my vote = street

|.R.SON.aLL.| · Post by **|.R.SON.aLL.|** » Fri Jan 26, 2007 3:15 am

3-4 .. Uppin` ..
Jay Killah`s Way ..

Haz · Post by **Haz** » Fri Jan 26, 2007 3:20 am

DAAATZ DA BIRD CALL

MesaR · Post by **MesaR** » Fri Jan 26, 2007 10:20 am

i no us kids gotta stick 2gether....but dayum streetcreppa
Won Im My Eyez..It was a real close battle because both verses sucked...uppin

|.R.SON.aLL.| · Post by **|.R.SON.aLL.|** » Fri Jan 26, 2007 11:26 am

4-4 .. One More Vote !!!!!!!!!!!

fuck haters · Post by **fuck haters** » Fri Jan 26, 2007 3:48 pm

another loss huh
still dont give a fuck!

Mac · Post by **Mac** » Fri Jan 26, 2007 3:52 pm

uppinnnn 4-4

Lawgix · Post by **Lawgix** » Fri Jan 26, 2007 6:19 pm

lmao anybody that would get their roomie to vote for this is pathetic... lmmfao its like gettin ur mom to vote on ur lyrics hahaha thats great

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