an old peice I came across<need feed>

[FatalX]

FLyAWAY
Sever and Kill

The only strength one could MUSTER,is from....FEAR & DREAD//
While fate shifts it shapes,and eyes peer through SILHOETTEs//
NO REGRETS...a faint scent... merely riddles the TERRAIN//
As the snow drifts slither,to bury MENS REMAINS//
and Howls of Pain-HAUNT,blood curdling DEATH RATTLES//
Searing the EARS of every MAN,Left standing in the BATTLE//
Rotting corpes whisper DEATH,as the lifeless lay about//
Leaving the Living feeling HELP-LESS,and clinging to the GROUND//
"Hanging on for Dear LIFE",This is"Kill or be KILLED"//
While GUNFIRE screaches WRATH,erupting tears and TERROR SHRILLS//
"All Hell has broke LOOSE",living proof that GOD EXIST//
RAGING on...the battle RUMBLES,NO MAN STANDS EXEMPT//
A life for a life,..........here are the SHADOWS of PHANTOMS//
as Chaos "Takes its TOLL",and banters moral stances//
both sides lose their FAITH,---"Who was brought HERE TO DIE?"---//
For every PRAYER that reached the HEAVENS,a BOMB fell from the SKY//

-- Fri May 18, 2012 1:37 pm --

I understand it needs some revision....I wrote this like almost 3 years ago
it has been untouched

[MonuMental]

both sides lose their FAITH,---"Who was brought HERE TO DIE?"---//
For every PRAYER that reached the HEAVENS,a BOMB fell from the SKY//

That bar went so fuckin hard, my dude. But yeah, I recognize it has to be old, it's not bad by any means, but i've seen evidence of your elevation since this time and I'd say it's dramatic, as with us all, I think. Nothing wrong with bringing something outta the archives, though. it was a nice lil read, gives a good idea of where you came from, mentally. And that closing bar like I said was ill as fuck. Stay up, Fatal.