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shut shit down ckno n syn of jungle productions

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myself n tha cofounder of my group shut shit down off of tha upcoming mixtape 4 tha love of music
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beat is hyphy...nice..i like it bruh

quality is needs a lil work ..

First verse sounds like its got good flo..delivery is pretty nice presence is there

Hook makes sense...i like the cadence

2nd verse..presence is aight..i like the lyrics..flo is aight some of the dubs make it sound a lil messy tho...tbh..
all in all not bad

2nd hook i cant really understand

3rd Verse...hmm flo is cool..ohh okay i like that a lil back and forth thing..thats coo bruh..

all in all this is a pretty nice track..good for a clubbin hyphy type joint...props..
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thanx 4 tha feedbak 2nd verse was me n tha hook is tha same thruout tha song
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