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Mac Vs. Ghost (Mac Winner)

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6-8 Bars
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No Dick Riding/Hating Votes(Guess Jay Killah Sits This One Out)

Good Luck Homie.
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I Attack Loud when I Act Out, And I aint a "gangsta" but Ima have to putta "Mac" Down,
Infact Mac you lookin kinda Cracked Out, you couldnt shit on me if you drank a Lax Down//
This guys got no meat on his bones, it s like "how does he survive?" like Kids in the East,
Ill Stick my Fist in the Beef and Rip out yuh Teeth, battlin Ghost bitch your jus Riskin Defeat//
Im Sickened wit Wrath, jus ask yuh Chick About That night she had her Lips on my Staff,
Ive Chrissened this Craft, send you to hell after the bell and call it a " Mission Misshap "//
Ima Teach Yuh not to play wit Ether so Shelter yuh Best, cuz when i spit Im Meltin yuh Flesh,
I Like you, but your only Seldomly Blessed, pressures put onto yuh brain so your Mentally Stressed//
Let this Lesson Be, to see you Bomb Desperately, Im Calm, Collectively layin here wit yuh Moms Next to Me,
You couldnt be "FlawLess" Mac like Toms Complexity, so put yuh hands behind yuh and yuh head down and walk slowly like Cops Arrestin Me//
You have mad potential to be hot like a House wit no Heat,
Roamin around the site, *sniffin* like a Mouse wit no Cheese//
I shatter hopes & dreams like Broken Mirrors, make you sweat like Out-Spoken Fears,
My "TechNique* is *Immortal*, pure emotion Flowin Here blowin up the Global Sphere//
Your like "bent frames" Never on Level Grounds, yuh jus the noise of the Baretta Sendin Rounds,
So when the VenDetta Settles Down, and the only way you get your hands dirty is when you Mudd Wrestle Clowns//


***flawless is macs aka or other name***
***and Tom is Complexity*** hope yall got that line
i'll smack yuh with rage i force multis outta my ass to the page
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What A Mass Disaster, I Got to Attack This Bastard,
But Who The Fuck's Ever Heard Of A Rappin Casper?//
Battlin The Wackest Rappers, Is The Only Reason He's Four an 0,
So I'm Releasin The Immortal Flow, Explode An Leavin Him Torn..Below//
You'll Fold For Certian An Ya Right Ghost Fits Perfect,
Cuz Ya Unknown And Plus Ya Flow Is Worthless//
I'm Assigned To Be Wrecklace, Rollin Wit V.I. Cuz Ya Vaginally Infected,
Time To Get Hectic Cuz You Beatin Me Is Like You Tryna Find Ya Reflection//
I'll Hit You With Punches Not Even Tyson Could Stop
Lightning Could Drop I'll Still Spit 8 With Out A License For Glocks//
You're A Flake And A Bitch It's Funny How You Makin Up Shit,
Which Is The Reason I Blazed You in 6 But There's 8 In This Clip//
Claimin You Got A Girl Yet You Hittin On Internet Broads?,
You're Fake As A Bitch But Atleast Jay Could Admit He's An Internet Fraud//
So I Guess That Just Goes To Prove, He's 13 With More Balls Then You,
Mannn You're Wack As Fuck, It's Over I Just Offed This Dude//

4th Bar:
He Rolls With a Crew Called V.I. (No Beef Of Course lol)
"Tryna Find Ya Reflection" His Name Is Ghost Enough said..

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Post by Haz »

Vote - Mac
Punchlines : Both
Metaphors : Mac
Name Play & Word Play : Both
Structure & Flow : Mac
Personals : Mac

...... He Took Ghost in Dis in My Opinion
Jus Came Off Alot Harder Good Battle 1-0 Uppin For Votes
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Post by |.R.SON.aLL.| »

Punches - Tie .. Both Came Wit Some Hot Punches .. i Liked That Reflection Punch .. That Was Sick ..
Multies - Ghost .. Enuff Said .. He Was all Over This Cat ..
Wordplay - Ghost ..
Personals - Mac .. He Had a Few in His Verse ..
Structure & Flow - Tie .. it Was Easy Readin` Both Of y`all Spits ..
Creativity - Tie .. Even amount Of Creative ..

Pretty Close Battle .. i Was Feelin` Ghost`s Better Though .. `cus He Flowed Better Wit Tha Multies .. & Topped it Off Wit a Nice Punch ..His Opener & Closer Was Crazy .. Mac Let Me Down .. i That He Woulda Had a Better Closer Than Wat He Dropped ..

Vote -Ghost ..

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I'm Assigned To Be Wrecklace, Rollin Wit V.I. Cuz Ya Vaginally Infected,
Time To Get Hectic Cuz You Beatin Me Is Like You Tryna Find Ya Reflection//

Ghost -

Let this Lesson Be, to see you Bomb Desperately, Im Calm, Collectively layin here wit yuh Moms Next to Me,
You couldnt be "FlawLess" Mac like Toms Complexity, so put yuh hands behind yuh and yuh head down and walk slowly like Cops Arrestin Me//
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.. it`s S.a.W Bitches ..
.. Niggas ain't Fuckin Wit Tha Team ..

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Post by Tha Kulprit »

Punches - Tie
Multies - Ghost
Wordplay - Ghost
Personals - Mac
Structure & Flow - Mac, flowed much better, clean easy to read..
Creativity - Tie

this was a close fuckin battle....

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I Attack Loud when I Act Out, And I aint a "gangsta" but Ima have to putta "Mac" Down,
Infact Mac you lookin kinda Cracked Out, you couldnt shit on me if you drank a Lax Down//

^^flowed pretty mice, good multi's decent punch, and decent wordplay, i liked it....

ya verse overall was hot, but ya bars is stretched, and u know mac, i was suprised u werent personal as fuck, u had some in there, but not nearly enough...good shit tho...

Mac -

You're A Flake And A Bitch It's Funny How You Makin Up Shit,
Which Is The Reason I Blazed You in 6 But There's 8 In This Clip//
Claimin You Got A Girl Yet You Hittin On Internet Broads?,
You're Fake As A Bitch But Atleast Jay Could Admit He's An Internet Fraud//

^^great personal, good punches, flow was like ya whole verse, dope...

ya verse was hot, good punches, ya closer was off... and a few other parts were a little lost, but ya flow was hot, good stucture, ya personals killed it. you kept it fresh i liked it...

Vote - Mac

felt his personals were harder, good punches, much better flow...
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Post by complexity »

I honestly thought Ghosts Punches were better, and personals hit harder. Asking him how he survives being so thin and shit.

Multis & wordplay also goes to ghost. Mac was close in every category though. Mac did have some slick nameplay.

Vote: Ghost
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Post by Onediversekid »

Punches - Tie
Multies - Ghost
Wordplay - Ghost
Personals - Mac
Structure & Flow - Mac, flowed much better, clean easy to read..
Creativity - Tie


Close Battle, But My Vote Goes To Mac, I Felt That Ghost Was Just Trying TO Rhyme W/e words He Could, And I Wasn't Really Feelin That.

Vote: Mac
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Post by ~Symbolikull~ »

3-2 in Macs favor
i'll smack yuh with rage i force multis outta my ass to the page
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Post by Mac »

Thanks For The Votes So Far Everybody, Not Just Mine, But Mine An Ghost In General.

Still Uppin...
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Post by -TraMaTiK- »

What A Mass Disaster, I Got to Attack This Bastard,
But Who The Fuck's Ever Heard Of A Rappin Casper?//
Battlin The Wackest Rappers, Is The Only Reason He's Four an 0,
So I'm Releasin The Immortal Flow, Explode An Leavin Him Torn..Below//


loved that shit^^^ overall both u guys had fire but i think mac hit it home wit the lines bout the reflection n shit...sooo my vote = mac
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Post by Mac »

4-2 Me I Think?

Thanks Voters
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I Attack Loud when I Act Out, And I aint a "gangsta" but Ima have to putta "Mac" Down,
Infact Mac you lookin kinda Cracked Out, you couldnt shit on me if you drank a Lax Down//
1st line was a good setup....and that lax follow up was coo ... i think if you put the 1st line last it would have hit a little harder wit the right wording
This guys got no meat on his bones, it s like "how does he survive?" like Kids in the East,
Ill Stick my Fist in the Beef and Rip out yuh Teeth, battlin Ghost bitch your jus Riskin Defeat//
1st line once again hit harder than the second line .. overall this bar was pretty good too
Im Sickened wit Wrath, jus ask yuh Chick About That night she had her Lips on my Staff,
Ive Chrissened this Craft, send you to hell after the bell and call it a " Mission Misshap "//
ouch... 1st line was rude tho im sure it aint a real person... and the second line i got quick .. just needed a hard base ... this was a good bar tho ..
Ima Teach Yuh not to play wit Ether so Shelter yuh Best, cuz when i spit Im Meltin yuh Flesh,
I Like you, but your only Seldomly Blessed, pressures put onto yuh brain so your Mentally Stressed//
1st line was iight.. needs work, second line was iight too .. ya other bars were better as far as the punches go
Let this Lesson Be, to see you Bomb Desperately, Im Calm, Collectively layin here wit yuh Moms Next to Me,
You couldnt be "FlawLess" Mac like Toms Complexity, so put yuh hands behind yuh and yuh head down and walk slowly like Cops Arrestin Me//
1st line again rude lol ... but not a true personal none the less......rofl at the second line .. that mad this bar pretty mean and your best in my eyes... good shit
You have mad potential to be hot like a House wit no Heat,
Roamin around the site, *sniffin* like a Mouse wit no Cheese//
1st line great set up jab .... and the following punchline made me laugh ... this was a gr8 bar too
I shatter hopes & dreams like Broken Mirrors, make you sweat like Out-Spoken Fears,
My "TechNique* is *Immortal*, pure emotion Flowin Here blowin up the Global Sphere//
1st line was an ok set up... i see the complexity in the second line but i think it needs work
Your like "bent frames" Never on Level Grounds, yuh jus the noise of the Baretta Sendin Rounds,
So when the VenDetta Settles Down, the only way you get your hands dirty is when you Mudd Wrestle Clowns//
1st line good up untill that baretta part..., the punch on the second line makes this bar hit pretty ok
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What A Mass Disaster, I Got to Attack This Bastard,
But Who The Fuck's Ever Heard Of A Rappin Casper?//
1st line is filler, second line is a funny style of subliminal personal nameplay... but needs a little work
Battlin The Wackest Rappers, Is The Only Reason He's Four an 0,
So I'm Releasin The Immortal Flow, Explode An Leavin Him Torn..Below//
iight possible personal on the 1st line, .. second line is in need of mad help
You'll Fold For Certian An Ya Right Ghost Fits Perfect,
Cuz Ya Unknown And Plus Ya Flow Is Worthless//
im just not feel'n this whole bar ..
I'm Assigned To Be Wrecklace, Rollin Wit V.I. Cuz Ya Vaginally Infected,
Time To Get Hectic Cuz You Beatin Me Is Like You Tryna Find Ya Reflection//
wow you made up for it in this bar .. use'n decent crew nameplay..with another subliminal nameplay punch
I'll Hit You With Punches Not Even Tyson Could Stop
Lightning Could Drop I'll Still Spit 8 With Out A License For Glocks//
1st line is iight .. kinda dumb... its not like tyson is the worlds best punch stoper he throws punches,.. second line ... that followup line was iight .. but needs work
You're A Flake And A Bitch It's Funny How You Makin Up Shit,
Which Is The Reason I Blazed You in 6 But There's 8 In This Clip//
this bar is in need of help
Claimin You Got A Girl Yet You Hittin On Internet Broads?,
You're Fake As A Bitch But Atleast Jay Could Admit He's An Internet Fraud//
rofl @ the 1st line,...your second line made all that change
So I Guess That Just Goes To Prove, He's 13 With More Balls Then You,
Mannn You're Wack As Fuck, It's Over I Just Offed This Dude//
not feel'n the finisher


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Punches =Ghost
Personals=MAC
Nameplay =Ghost
Wordplay =Ghost
Metaphors =Ghost
Multies =Ghost more complex with his
Complexity =Ghost was more orignial with his
Creativity =Ghost
Consistancy=Ghost tried to keep punches in everyline

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Flow-Mac
Structure-Mac
Vocab-Ghost

Vote- Ghost
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Post by |.R.SON.aLL.| »

4-3 ..
This is a Close ass Battle ..
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.. Niggas ain't Fuckin Wit Tha Team ..

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Post by Viral »

well in my opinion u both did pretty good....ive seen better from both but it was still decently up to par....i felt like mac took this one tho...his punches were more direct, n he stayed on em....kinda felt like ghost was gettin a lil bit off the punchlines...he had good ones but they didnt hit as hard as macs....so my vote goes to mac...



that makes it 5-3...battle closed...Mac Wins...ill update n lock this
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