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Money, Power, Respect.

give me that louchie, louchie, Dress suits made by Armani & Gucci
A fat wallet with hundreds in stacks Like you see in the movies
with groupies squeezing dollars from my tips like diner dishwashers
getting big offers, from big businesses because my shits proper
with 6 doctors making beats to meet my needs like tailored clothes
make major dough but the bread made isnt by a baker though
to be unfade-able with the world resting in the palm of my hand
powerful like bomb contraband rapped inside the song of a band
in the sauna agan sweating diamonds and breathing gold dust
in a hold up i come out cultured with weighted pockets bulged up
Respect the cold cut, in a warm up i stays Cool like L’ fiasco
even hell be mad down cause i plan to be the king that held the crown
cash held me down, but the power and respect planted roots
i plant slanted truths on my competitors who camp in suites
Revamp Reduce, its money, power, respect with a direct connect
to a regiment of people ready to sweat to death for a fuckin check
here to collect my Respect by any means deemed as possible
through any obstacle in my optical from the poles to the tropicals
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Post by Kuhlerblynd »

The fiasco line threw the flow off a little for me.

Otherwise, the flow and multi's were on fucking point. Alot of wordplay and shit tied in, which I always appreciate in a written.

Really liked this whole section right here. Just stood out to me lol.
with groupies squeezing dollars from my tips like diner dishwashers
getting big offers, from big businesses because my shits proper
with 6 doctors making beats to meet my needs like tailored clothes
make major dough but the bread made isnt by a baker though

Nice fucking drop fam. Keep it coming.
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Post by Lawgix »

i liked this man... even the cool j fiasco line... changed up the style a bit... i liked it... this was worth the read...

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Post by QwarterZ »

I gotta agree with Kuhler
that L' Fiasco did throw me off
but other then that it was consistent
I was feeling the flow and what you were saying
reminds me of how Biggie would flow
basically cuz thats who I was thinking of
nice drop though my dude..keep it up
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