When guessing

[Haz]

I'm about ta grind like a drought is fine
think i'm at my best while I reroute my prime
my bright thoughts are out and about like shyne
while some are good without a voice like a mouthless mime
They still do sniff tests cause cats doubt the lines
Writing timeless raps,while they say we're almost out of time
surrounded by 2012 representitives, sitting in a house of signs
still not in college just to report the status
class me with the people on a crash course of madness
uncovering new grounds like i'm passport established
I don't vaca in khaos N won't resort ta havoc
Buying my own weed even If I don't support the habit
Part time worker, full time visionary
Brushing the dirt off my shoulders that I didn't bury
I never passed up a past tour, falling for the trap door
can I get a brake or is this the crash course
No windows in this open house just the glass floors
Societies giving me a hard time what do I give back for?
we aren't built the same, I'm calm and still insane
Keeping my trade firm like a still exchange
My will ta change for the skills and pain
The deal remains and isn't known for movement
paid dues for my spot now its home improvement
never gave the bench press..like i'm stuck ta curls
like thats the hairstyle that'll make me cuff a girl
i'm a jewel hoarder, you're a journalist that covers pearls
Get that straight like whats a swirl.. when you realize
only you know what you've gone through ya brains like another world
theres no love for the underdog its tragic their O in heart
just Know Rock bottom has a bottom and i'm ocean smart
when my minds clouded thats when the smoking starts
Like fireworks of vibes a motion sparks me to write the dopest art
Hes not a visual painter with lines is he? you'll spot lyrical
before you find pitty, each lines witty and thought out
till its read raw.. ready to cook, trust me you won't be Fed flaw
like F.b.i perfection..My direction pushes aside the questions
As I provide a lesson..Keep a vision, Use ya eyes when guessing

[Arvincible]

never gave the bench press..like i'm stuck ta curls like thats the hairstyle that'll make me cuff a girl

Dope as fuck...

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[Haz]

thanks arv

[88SkyLink]

I liked this piece. You delivered good multis and some really good lines. The spelling did kinda throw me off, but other than that it was worth the read, keep it up fam

[Komatose]

solid flow good format/structure i liked the delivery multies were decent too good drop all an all keep it up an welcome to ArchiText Penmanship

[Haz]

thanks

[Defiance]

class me with the people on a crash course of madness
uncovering new grounds like i'm passport established

like that


Dude you always got some good shit coming out you brain box it re-damn-diculous

i liked it good message stayed on topic. didn't drown out the stylings with non sense


good shit bro

[QwarterZ]

There you go again Haz, styling on these fools, I'm really digging the style
you always got some nice rhymes and some memorable quotables in your pieces
always seem to be consistent when it comes to that, so good job my dude
keep writing cuz you keep a nice balance to the board

[TreTru]

yeah ill admit this one was nice all around..alot of the punches were coo but most of all fresh......wow ..

multis were nice..vocab was high grade imo....

Just Dope!!

[vanity]

I'm about ta grind like a drought is fine
think i'm at my best while I reroute my prime
my bright thoughts are out and about like shyne
while some are good without a voice like a mouthless mime

^^^ wow i loved this!

They still do sniff tests cause cats doubt the lines
Writing timeless raps,while they say we're almost out of time
surrounded by 2012 representitives, sitting in a house of signs
still not in college just to report the status

^^^ nice


class me with the people on a crash course of madness
uncovering new grounds like i'm passport established
I don't vaca in khaos N won't resort ta havoc
Buying my own weed even If I don't support the habit

^^^ ha brilliant

Part time worker, full time visionary
Brushing the dirt off my shoulders that I didn't bury

^^^ thats me lol


I never passed up a past tour, falling for the trap door
can I get a brake or is this the crash course
No windows in this open house just the glass floors
Societies giving me a hard time what do I give back for?

^^^ im really feeling this, something id want to say, loved how u expressed it!

we aren't built the same, I'm calm and still insane
Keeping my trade firm like a still exchange
My will ta change for the skills and pain

^^^ very nice

The deal remains and isn't known for movement
paid dues for my spot now its home improvement
never gave the bench press..like i'm stuck ta curls
like thats the hairstyle that'll make me cuff a girl
i'm a jewel hoarder, you're a journalist that covers pearls

Get that straight like whats a swirl.. when you realize
only you know what you've gone through ya brains like another world

^^^ wow makes me want to start writing lol

theres no love for the underdog its tragic their O in heart
just Know Rock bottom has a bottom and i'm ocean smart

^^^one of my fav gave me chills

when my minds clouded thats when the smoking starts
Like fireworks of vibes a motion sparks me to write the dopest art
Hes not a visual painter with lines is he? you'll spot lyrical
before you find pitty, each lines witty and thought out

^^^ looks like all ur lines are very well thought out!


till its read raw.. ready to cook, trust me you won't be Fed flaw
like F.b.i perfection..My direction pushes aside the questions
As I provide a lesson..Keep a vision, Use ya eyes when guessing

^^^ great ending

loved it i can actually read this again u def write great lyrics, nice flow, awesome multis, excellent choice of vocab this is great id say flawless im no expert i just admire talent, great job id love to read more!