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Multiple Threats (AAS V.2)

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you can't capture-me, actually I'm mathematically stronger than earths-gravity
reverse-tragedy you mad-at-me cause I'm stylin graphically painting imaginings
i had-to-be the mack-and-king attacking-dreams like a Freddy Cruger reincarnate
i weave-an-carve-fate in between-a-hard-place a cut demeanor like you see-this-scarred-face?
i be-that-hard-case who breathes-in-sharpe-takes as i exasperate swing and lacerate
than i activate begin to emasculate too rash-to-wait with brash attacks to calculate
as i salivate i lick-my-cheek pick-my-beat and eat emcees ever so wickedly an explicitly
you cant prohibit-me only inhibit-me I'm gifted-see and i'll climb past your fortifications
with a shortened-invasion and forceful-equations put inside this sword-that-im-wavin
the horde-is-waiting, for defiance's-rise with violence-in-stride that the virus is dying-to-try
you vying-for-my attention is denying-my-intention for greatness like alexander
with the foulest-manners i balance-slander and stay slick like a giant salamander
your average banter doesn't match-stride thats-why i pack-five fingers to tax-guys
i dont rap-high my raps-fly i chastise these wack-guys with crack-eyes til there reborn like they've been baptized/
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this is a fawkin multiple massacre..haha no doubt
imo this has always been your strong suit ..

nice Vocab..wow man your becoming an all around writer..
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Post by Lawgix »

damn i don't read many writtens but i liked this one... multies were crazy man... this would sound great on a beat...
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Post by vanity »

wow very impressive i had read this b4 and loved it i just couldnt leave u feed, see this is how i want to write!!! but i have a long way to go, u r def a great writer loved it!
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this was niiiicceee ... The multies were dope, the flow was good, and you had some really good lines. Tre said it for me. Im not so sure about your battling, but apart from that you have certainly got an all-round skill.
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Post by QwarterZ »

This was actually pretty crazy, the multi usage in this was bananas
you really kept it consistent and made it flow together pretty nicely
I can imagine you spittin this pretty fast and going in on a beat just to make a statement
pretty nice piece, can't wait to see how long you keep this series going my dude...keep writing
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