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Defiance
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All about Self (AAS volume 1)

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nijitsu kungfu mofucker flinging nun chucks at dumb fucks
doing dirt like a dump truck you winning must be dumb luck
I'm here to One up any all comers Coyotes to roadrunna
a known stunna so gutta and so slick just call me gold butta
the hoe throat buster while y'all get no pussy like an old rubber
i steer with no rudder still i cross the finish ahead of the pack
leave ya dead in a sack reddened and bashed for stepping on tracks
put lead in ya dash to slow ya role, you an actor I'm directing
reflecting intelligence so its never a question of my complexion
a woman getting my affection? i try an vibe with quiet contention
with a tyrants weapon i envie the wildest mentioned, Defiance bitch
ima pimp deny the fly that i invent and get hit with an iron riot stick
i spit the tightest shit, in wav, Mp3, on a mic or without one
spits could rip out lungs break vocal cords and rip out tongues
im sick i kick out crumbs i need a meal not an appetizer
ya girl i satisfy her pet the cat n ride her til i chap her ass an thighs bare
am i scared, no never I'm so clever i pull levers and drop hotness
you can't mock conscious I'm enlightened like high end light sockets
i might talk shit, but i can back it with manned tactics pacific to atlantic
my mad gambits have got me rich going broke with damn plastic
dagnabbit itsa bad habit to look at your self and think "thats Classic"
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Re: All about Self (AAS volume 1)

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this shit was dope man, i liked the whole thing, the flow was sick i think. good display of vocab and multis. some solid metaphores and puns in there too. good piece man.
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Re: All about Self (AAS volume 1)

Post by Haz »

Nice, you went in all the way through
Def went in with multis, Vocab was on point
flow was good..Different from what you usually do.
I Liked it man, good read. Keep dropping
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Post by Shooter »

The flow was fantastic and the punches were on point I enjoyed the whole thing

Keep up the good work

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