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yo,let me lay it down for these blatant nerds in laymans terms hating on the way i'm saying words, will only make the situation worse,when my patience wears, you'll have no face to save, it will have been replaced with kerb.i'd say save face an retreat, mate your facing defeat,the lace on my feet will put you straight in the street, into gods keep, tasting concrete, but you will probably not heed the advice, so here it is twice, for the delerious type who are serious to fight,dear............... its time to fear for your life.
this aint a warning shot it's a callout but respond at your cost, your loss, when four sawnoffs blow your porch door off, you better get the callbox an call cops, have this poor cock squeaking like he was before his balls dropped.
one punch will have you choking like your jawlocked, awestruck,poor fuck i got awesome forces to call up,1 hammer fist to this faggit bitch and he'd be unsure whether Thor'd struck.(4)i'm oven hot your the preheat before you cook, warming up? im scorching stuff,born to fuckin incinerate,your slower than it takes cooking eight minute steaks on a george foreman grilling plate sit and wait wondering how long will dinner take??? your shit is late and tastes as great as the dinner plate.


fuck knows im stoned..
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lol this reminded me of some old school type of shit..then I kept reading and I was like whaaaaat...that shit cray...and I just smiled at this...then I figured damn..this guy..hit the end..and Im like yea hes blazed outta his mind..this made me lol for the most part considering you just did whatever but still came off serious...keep writing

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