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Leeroy Jenkins
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Venting in Rhyming Words

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I keep watching these opportunities go by...
and I don't know why
but at times I don't even try
Maybe I'm a glutton for punishment...
I'm only comfortable when
I'm caught up in trouble...Am I -
Some of kind of drama setter?
I feel like I'm trynna better my life
At the same time, I can only set up my strife
Yet I strive
For more than a 9 to 5
I deserve it...
I wanna know that everything was worth it
That every mistake that I made had a purpose
That I can still fit in this world when I'm imperfect
That every time that I prayed, somebody heard it
I feel like I'm on trial for life and waitin for the verdict...
Am I permanent failure or a success to come?
Never rest, like the drum in my chest
And when it stops, will I be one less
Or will the world remember my death?

I guess I'm on that indie bullshit,
Is it...
Only a coincidence, my clothes started fittin in
with cool kids...
When the ones I went to school with
Labeled me a misfit for rocking the same shit
Everything'll change quick
Ain't it strange, how the whole fucking game
Became catered to this?
Like almost everything is falling into place
All I gotta do is get in the gate
and then I'll be straight...
But if I wait, then I may not be in the shape
If I do live until tomorrow, I won't be young as today
Why do we try attain, what we should try to contain
What everybody claims as the root of all evil pain
And lord knows what money'll do to Judas
Imagine, what the same would make you do to a human
I can't stress no more, I'm on my last breath
Tell me will the world remember my death?
My psychologist tells me that I suffer from serious delusions of sexual grandeur. I think she just wants to fuck me

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Re: Venting in Rhyming Words

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This was some real life shit...really came out better then expected too..Im digging the vibe..the emotion was on point really helped the word usage come power packed with some truth...nice drop my dude...keep writing

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