Grotesque Jesters (horrorcore)

[Defiance]

hand me a rusty blade and i'll turn your face from taylor swift to taylor made
words are dirt like what a sailor say thats why i talk like I'm spitting liquid grenades
I've been a disgrace, since i've been in the race, place? shit i eat the competition
constant skisms from drunken visions have got me hot blooded and rocking like pistons
they made a gotham a prison just to hold the wicked but they never could confine defiance
leave um blind and silenced in tha line of violence While they bitchin about the wait time
i can say more in 8 lines than most rappers say in their damn life still they hate mines
fuck a date line, i punch a cunt and rape the bitch spot a page copy and paste my dick
and call her a fucking plagiarist, shit the bitch can Wrap a dong an take a fist.
the pace is quick, but death is faster Rookies die from trying to test the master
a fresh disaster leaving rappers soaked like lake cadavers when i shank they bladder
you don't rank or matter.. so quit fronting this isn't a fucking Act or scene
i don't act obscene i am obscene check the clip, infected bullets be in the magazine
leave ya casket clean.. with out a body or ashes, high off acid waving a shotty in traffic
you can't body a maverick you hardly can match it how can you be gaudy in plastic
im naughty an rash with, these ideas when i see ya i'd hate to be ya when i hit the speakers
i'll grip ya features and rip ya teachers cause I'm the professor of the bloody architecture
im sharp to pressure cause art is pleasure I'm cold at least as far as the heart is measured

[TreTru]

this was dope all the way around..i liked the rhymescheme..and flo was on the whole time..
multies all lined up nicely..id have to say
im impressed with this written from you..

I've been a disgrace, since i've been in the race, place? shit i eat the competition
constant skisms from drunken visions have got me hot blooded and rocking like pistons
^^^
I like the way this line played out...
don't act obscene i am obscene check the clip, infected bullets be in the magazine
leave ya casket clean.. with out a body or ashes, high off acid waving a shotty in traffic
^^^
Nice vowel transfer here i like this rhymescheme
and the shotty multi lined up great...


good stuff bruh

[probablyTreed]

with out a body or ashes, high off acid waving a shotty in traffic

haha sick man.

you don't rank or matter.. so quit fronting this isn't a fucking Act or scene
i don't act obscene i am obscene check the clip, infected bullets be in the magazine
leave ya casket clean.

u go hard man, what can i say

when i hit the speakers
i'll grip ya features and rip ya teachers cause I'm the professor of the bloody architecture
im sharp to pressure cause art is pleasure I'm cold at least as far as the heart is measured

wow

[Defiance]

thanks fellers glad you like it upping this beatral

[AntiMaTTer]

hand me a rusty blade and i'll turn your face from taylor swift to taylor made
words are dirt like what a sailor say thats why i talk like I'm spitting liquid grenades
I've been a disgrace, since i've been in the race, place? shit i eat the competition
constant skisms from drunken visions have got me hot blooded and rocking like pistons
like the first line mos here with the "Talor Made" pun, shit was funny. pretty dark and grimey like so far which i always like that style

they made a gotham a prison just to hold the wicked but they never could confine defiance
leave um blind and silenced in tha line of violence While they bitchin about the wait time
i can say more in 8 lines than most rappers say in their damn life still they hate mines
like this part better than the other lines so far, the line about you say more in 8 lines probably isnt far from the truth either.

fuck a date line, i punch a cunt and rape the bitch spot a page copy and paste my dick
and call her a fucking plagiarist, shit the bitch can Wrap a dong an take a fist.
the pace is quick, but death is faster Rookies die from trying to test the master
the flow here was nice, you do that carry the multi to the next line shit like i do, which i think makes the flow easier to carry over to the
next bar

a fresh disaster leaving rappers soaked like lake cadavers when i shank they bladder
you don't rank or matter.. so quit fronting this isn't a fucking Act or scene
i don't act obscene i am obscene check the clip, infected bullets be in the magazine
this pun was pretty good, the "scene/clip" line was catch and the flow is still strong thru out

leave ya casket clean.. with out a body or ashes, high off acid waving a shotty in traffic
you can't body a maverick you hardly can match it how can you be gaudy in plastic
im naughty an rash with, these ideas when i see ya i'd hate to be ya when i hit the speakers
i'll grip ya features and rip ya teachers cause I'm the professor of the bloody architecture
im sharp to pressure cause art is pleasure I'm cold at least as far as the heart is measured
really reminds me of something id write out of the blue to be honest, the dark gritty spit behind it with the multis like that. good shit i think this a solid piece thru and thru.

[Haz]

hand me a rusty blade and i'll turn your face from taylor swift to taylor made
words are dirt like what a sailor say thats why i talk like I'm spitting liquid grenades
I've been a disgrace, since i've been in the race, place? shit i eat the competition

I Liked this

they made a gotham a prison just to hold the wicked but they never could confine defiance
leave um blind and silenced in tha line of violence

Tough


fuck a date line, i punch a cunt and rape the bitch spot a page copy and paste my dick


LOL


you don't rank or matter.. so quit fronting this isn't a fucking Act or scene
i don't act obscene i am obscene check the clip, infected bullets be in the magazine
leave ya casket clean.. with out a body or ashes, high off acid waving a shotty in traffic


Went In


i'll grip ya features and rip ya teachers cause I'm the professor of the bloody architecture
im sharp to pressure cause art is pleasure I'm cold at least as far as the heart is measured

Good way to end it


I Like this piece, it almost seems like you went outside of what you were doing.
some good stuff in this piece.. Good read, keep it up

[MonuMental]

hand me a rusty blade and i'll turn your face from taylor swift to taylor made
words are dirt like what a sailor say thats why i talk like I'm spitting liquid grenades
I've been a disgrace, since i've been in the race, place? shit i eat the competition
constant skisms from drunken visions have got me hot blooded and rocking like pistons

You came out swingin with the multies, bruh. The imagery was classic Defiance and the content was on point as usual.

they made a gotham a prison just to hold the wicked but they never could confine defiance
leave um blind and silenced in tha line of violence While they bitchin about the wait time
i can say more in 8 lines than most rappers say in their damn life still they hate mines
fuck a date line, i punch a cunt and rape the bitch spot a page copy and paste my dick

Last two bars were absolutely riptastic, my brotha. First two hit hard as well, but the last two grabbed me.
and call her a fucking plagiarist, shit the bitch can Wrap a dong an take a fist.
the pace is quick, but death is faster Rookies die from trying to test the master
a fresh disaster leaving rappers soaked like lake cadavers when i shank they bladder
you don't rank or matter.. so quit fronting this isn't a fucking Act or scene

I like how well the last bar of these four lead off smoothly into the next four. Tight work, your continuity is one of your greatest strengths.
i don't act obscene i am obscene check the clip, infected bullets be in the magazine
leave ya casket clean.. with out a body or ashes, high off acid waving a shotty in traffic
you can't body a maverick you hardly can match it how can you be gaudy in plastic
im naughty an rash with, these ideas when i see ya i'd hate to be ya when i hit the speakers

Multies went CRAZY in this stanza, my guy. All I can really say. THe first two bars grabbed me more than the latter two, though.
i'll grip ya features and rip ya teachers cause I'm the professor of the bloody architecture
im sharp to pressure cause art is pleasure I'm cold at least as far as the heart is measured

Excellent closer, bruh. All the above mentioned factors went together nicely to help you deliver another tight piece of work. The closeness to topic throughout really brought this one homie. Dope shit, homie.

[QwarterZ]

This was a pretty sick piece man..been awhile since I read some horrorcore..makes me want to write some shit...but not really lol...nice use of vocab here...crazy flow to it too...a pretty dope drop though you did your thing with this..keep dropping

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[Jsteel]

This is the first time reading a piece of yours and I am impressed by it,made it pleasant to follow with the flow and multis ,flawless to me bra,very hard hitting, it definetly is awesome,goNna wait for more from you,

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