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QwarterZ
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What Is It??????

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[video]http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=nfYUDOK5q8s[/video]

What does it take for completion, what does it take to be completed?
a sense of need and a sense that leaves me feeling so indecent..
see I'm twisted in depletion...to the point all of my emotion is deleted
I really needed a moment to lean on, scream on, but I'd rather leave it
for past, present, future seasons...and if all things is worth the seizin'
then what I lose alone should keep me from thinkin' I'm creepin'
cuz if the drink got my woozy, and the weed got me hazy
then all the dreams I'm losin', is a dark night sky to me baby
it's a dark night sky to me lately, I can't understand my ol' lady
in my head I'm screamin' FUCK THAT, cuz I really can't see me lovin' that
and I could never run back, I call the plays now...guess you can say QwarterZ back....
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QWARTZ IS BACK

I know i fed everything.. but loving to see you back man


Keep dropping heat bro
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Post by Quix »

agreed ^^


but to be honest this beat really didn't fit the piece all that good. Plus it was short. BUTTTTT I liked the piece without the beat playing lol. Liking your style on your wrttens mah dude. keep it up
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What does it take for completion, what does it take to be completed?
a sense of need and a sense that leaves me feeling so indecent..
see I'm twisted in depletion...to the point all of my emotion is deleted
I really needed a moment to lean on, scream on, but I'd rather leave it

I liked that.

this was cool Iv'e seen you do better. I take this as a Intro.
Keep It up.
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