Welcome to Illest Lyrics forum established in 2005.
----
Free Vapes

Ordinary Love Shit (Pt. 4) {Snippet}

Drop your written rhymes in one of the largest collections of original rhymes on the internet. The feedback in our Written Rhymes section will simply amaze you.

Moderators: Loon E Lou, Enlightend

Post Reply
User avatar
GhoStWriDa001
Novice
Offline
Posts: 62
Joined: Fri Feb 04, 2011 10:52 am
Wins: 1
Losses: 3

Ordinary Love Shit (Pt. 4) {Snippet}

Post by GhoStWriDa001 »

Yeah, umm.. to all my failures in life.. Ughh..

No respect from her, she acted terrible, rude
Parents were only lacking arrogant views
Question was, "Whos that embarrassment Sue?"..
Made me feel worse, sadden bearable news
I couldnt ignore, choices that were placed
Listen to the past voices that were pained
Still asking, and asing who wronged instead
I couldve happen to had a move on and left
Well rested, blasting few songs cassettes..
She couldve been there before me to help
Those times we had sharing stories in bed
Only with issues, barely morally and threats
Parents just be angry and mad at you..
And me too, its crazy Im bad for you..
But real, lately your passed in school..
You were a aces on a roll, much to genre be it
But de-graded because you wasnt gonna see it
Straight ease, youd hadnt touch alot of Gs yet..
And..
Last edited by GhoStWriDa001 on Tue Jan 17, 2012 7:09 pm, edited 3 times in total.
User avatar
FatalX
Lyrically Inclined
Offline
Posts: 147
Joined: Fri Feb 11, 2011 12:36 pm
Wins: 5
Losses: 3

Re: Ordinary Love Shit (Pt. 4) {Snippet}

Post by FatalX »

"who's that embarrassment Sue"=best line
this is a snippet...why you would post this I dont know...this is a written section but I havent been here in a while so shit could of changed....Im sure this was a peice to a song or maybe I should have caught the begginning to all this
I CHANNEL all my ENERGY,
while my SPIRIT is SOLEMN//
you HEAR my WORDS in the STREETS-->
because I'm SPEAKING in VOLUMES//

I'm like the MEDIA with QUESTIONS-I never stop SHOOTING
so IF you really got a PROBLEM-we can make this EXCLUSIVE...//
Haz
Supreme Lyricist
Offline
Posts: 6800
Joined: Mon Dec 18, 2006 1:41 am
Wins: 67
Losses: 70
Location: The Port

Re: Ordinary Love Shit (Pt. 4) {Snippet}

Post by Haz »

I'm taking it this is your OLS4 And Not Joe's ...
Image
User avatar
GhoStWriDa001
Novice
Offline
Posts: 62
Joined: Fri Feb 04, 2011 10:52 am
Wins: 1
Losses: 3

Re: Ordinary Love Shit (Pt. 4) {Snippet}

Post by GhoStWriDa001 »

Haz.. Joe B doesnt have a part four..

FatalX.. Yeah im on mobile thats why.. It was off my head.. Til i get back on a computer i'll finish..

[ Post made via Mobile Device ] Image
User avatar
QwarterZ
Rap Professional
Offline
Posts: 1688
Joined: Thu Oct 29, 2009 7:01 am
Wins: 4
Losses: 9

Re: Ordinary Love Shit (Pt. 4) {Snippet}

Post by QwarterZ »

Joe Budden is actually working on a Part 4 for your information

Joey>>>>>>>>>>
Haz
Supreme Lyricist
Offline
Posts: 6800
Joined: Mon Dec 18, 2006 1:41 am
Wins: 67
Losses: 70
Location: The Port

Re: Ordinary Love Shit (Pt. 4) {Snippet}

Post by Haz »

QwarterZ wrote:Joe Budden is actually working on a Part 4 for your information

Joey>>>>>>>>>>

word

...


No respect from her, she acted terrible, rude
Parents were only lacking arrogant views
Question was, "Whos that embarrassment Sue?"..
Made me feel worse, sadden bearable news--

just keep getting stronger and I'm sure this will be nice.
I like how you end it off.. "sadden bearable news"
Paint's a picture. Keep it up
Image
User avatar
GhoStWriDa001
Novice
Offline
Posts: 62
Joined: Fri Feb 04, 2011 10:52 am
Wins: 1
Losses: 3

Re: Ordinary Love Shit (Pt. 4) {Snippet}

Post by GhoStWriDa001 »

Thanx.. I try..

[ Post made via Mobile Device ] Image
Post Reply

Return to “Written Rhymes”

Who is online

Users browsing this forum: No registered users and 2 guests