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[video]http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=9ZhhwWHu ... re=related[/video]


The ink dripped offa the pen, guess I was thinking again
on the brink of events, never used to be what we think of when..
we was younger, more youthful in suspense, fruitful and tense
surrounded by a group full of friends, confused by the beautiful connect
but dropped the line beforehand, having the same days Eeyore had
the days seem more bland, and the nights mess with me I seen your man....
and here I am walking down memory lane, tripping over everything we gained
everything we lost, December breeds rain, I'm slipping like will we ever be..again?
I'm freezing over, thanx to cold shoulders, believing that this is so over
I broke ever tension, slipped into depression, cold lakes that I roamed over
something I'm forgettin', I rolled over, hold on a second I'm a known soldier
fighting with insanity before I've grown older, a gladitor before Rome's over
see I could proclaim my love, while you watch as I write ur name in blood
and as everything gets stained and rubbed into the collisium will it change or what?
am I to blame or what? cuz I never understood what you really made of us
so I continue on the same road, playing all of these childish game's so...
one day maybeI would finally make growth, but it feels like I ain't grown
to what you like, it's whatever just another day tryna get this shit together
tryna find a position better, but now I'm feelin' like it's been forever
since I really held a decent conversation, so I practice erryday in moderation
so as things get more complicated, and I stayed consistent kept concentratin'
thought to myself the game is changin', I can't live without everythin' you made of him
more like made of me, till this day I think of you and try to recreate the dream
so when i get back to you, lay it down nice, I always leave my baby free'd...
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Post by Quix »

Hot damn ... Qwarterz is backk.

Dude IMO oppinion, this piece had everything. Flow was Illy off the start. content stayed on point through out. vocab was used ver nicely. overall i liekd this piece a lot Q. Keep droppin this shit...and i'll keep reading it . 1
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Nice piece! You always got one of the nicest flows in ya drops. Multies on point and topics good. Great drop.
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