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Re: Verbal Perfection - Fall back!

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this was ight, had a couple nice punches here and there. mediocore though in my opinion. but then again i look for punchlines and wordplay more than any other


6/10 nice drop Quix
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had enough of this GUYS AGGRETION! I'm a Put tah barrel to his skull and watch him FLY TO HEAVEN!
you suck, thats why Cats don't Love you plus i'm in a 'Class above you' like PILOT LESSONS
you think you Cool, well I'm COLDER LITTERALLY! I'm Drunk at mind and olny SOBER PHYSICALLY!
Hazzard, I know you gon Loose cuz i'm a 'show you the Boot! like Flying OVER ITALY!


^^oh wow... haha those bars had my spinnin in my rolly chair bahahahaha

But i think you should have stopped after that... lost my attention on the second verse but it was an ill diss drop/ warning shot all together I hope this beef developes into something good
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Post by Arvincible »

dope

quix is consistent

lol

menace is improving a lot, way to stick with it and develope man

the flat line is not new though..

my fave bar was the butter knife opener

good shit, makes me wanna diss ppl again lol
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That whole thing was me dude ^ Menace was SUPPOSED tah Be on it, but he neva sent me his Verse. He was Busy wid some shit!


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aye quix when is our collab goin down
The Eagerness Is Putrid My Fluids Acid Leaves You Vexed Like Black Holes
Your Inept To Correct Stretched Like Fat Folds Perplexed Like Castro
I'm So Tenacious With Rhymes Sensatious So Patient With Lines
While You Fill Your Writtens With Filler And So Stay Vacant In Mind
I'm Amiable But Too Your Haters I Appease Your Arcane Admissions
Dark Games No Vision Your Avarice Lead To Scarred Shamed Partitions
So Callous In His Candor You Have To Coerce For Neglect
For Worse Or For Best I'm Confidant With A Verse Of Respect

!!ILLEST MINDS!!
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***COUGH ****



OPPS...memories of hazzards funeral!! ahh this was fun!!

lmfao
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QUIX=Str8 Blacked OUT ON DA TRACK Punches Were Nutz

Menace= Was Good But I Don't Know if That One Little Diss To Plex Was Worth The Comeback Youll Recieve...
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that was all me, Menace never got me his verse intime! lol but thanks!
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I'll send a message, cut throats without weapons, No exceptions, I'm here like a teacher to give lessons, I'll steal your bitch like an interception, Zeal fists in your face before you ask questions, Turn your progession into a deep depression, Messin up your face like I'm doin an operation, You got no rap relation, no retaliation, Go back to your hole, like hibernation, I'll make you bleed like menstruation, This is my verbal assassination.
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complexity wrote:I have a long term memory. I'll remember to respond back to this, it just might be a while.

Right now, I'm going to concentrate on the sites activity. That everyone seems to want to undermine.
excuse me but what the fuck is your problem when I hit a nigga, it fucks up his contioous, I'm beast in these streets in the bed I'm a monsta
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Don't worry its cookin up..
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