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Naturally Disastrous (A Collectively Ill Collab)

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The idea is simple. We each spit 6 bars about a natural disaster. First is Quix followed by myself and lastly Kuhler.



I'm Hellashis when I show up deface the square and throw up replacing Bears with stone
leave them faceless with no home, I'm unstoppable there's absolutely no escaping where I roam
semi automatics, won't be aiming at my bones ... cuz I'm merely a Seismic wave the size of Bays
pissed off, acting like I've been deprived for days .. and any one left in my vicinity ... well shit, I'm surprised you stayed!
cuz seriously, I can eliminate God's Work, and 'end human existence' faster than you can Make Dessert
convey and Portray my worth, have the ability to hold the 'world in my palms' and really Shake the Earth
so have you realized yet, that maybe I'm Important?? lil misunderstood, might seem Crazy when I Torment??
and if you continue to be Lazy and ignore me ... then I'll continue on my path ... and turn even more babies into orphans
I'm faster than a rabbit, don't Mistake me for a Tortoise ... or it's you that will Lose the race
I allude to faith, cuz there were many 'correct paths' but it seems those you Refused to Take
so now, I'll abuse the lakes ... and defy all you too, for all the corny lies that you use
so respect my potential and send a sign that you do, or its 'even more destruction' just ask people in China for proof



Red light flashing on the red phone, NASA has a red alert for the head home.
Every living cell on the planet is damned when the whole thing becomes a dead zone.
It really couldn’t get any worse than an asteroid headed for earth.
Nothing left to do but make peace, unless maybe you’re angsty, sweat it and curse.
Panic in the streets as the word gets out, fear stricken kids let out worthless shouts.
No skeptics with concern or doubt cause you can see that rock in the sky burning now.
The globe starts to heat up and tremble, Begins to get beat up, disassembles.
It’s like the rapture only after no one is saved, going to graves, the living surrender.
But this isn’t the end, no. For humans, yes. Our prudent death and who’d have guessed?
A chance for the earth to again give birth when only primordial ooze is left.
And soon, what’s next is truly blessed, as Mother Nature’s tears will flow.
To spring up the first green plants and the world advances like millions of years ago.



A spark starts and shocks me into form, so cocky when I'm born
On the hot seat in some shorts, you better enjoy the calm before the storm
You spit fire? Be honest, I'm the source! Known to take families out of homes
Sending signals in clouds of smoke, only conquered if someone drowns my soul
If you didn't before, now you know! Destroy forests, show no remorse for it
Devour any corpses quick, dance eagerly, anxiously ready to torch some shit
Got 'em like "That's fucking hot!" Of course it is! Smoke stacks ask How can you breathe?
This heat rises, pounding ya cheeks til it proceeds past a thousand degrees
Barely make a sound when I sneak through fields and plains as I sweep across states
Forcing people to breathe the heartache while giving new meaning to the phrase eat a hot plate
Believe I stock graves, disregarding any of those feelings you cherish
Natural disasters? I'm still one of merit. By my very hand, millions have perished.
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Red light flashing on the red phone, NASA has a red alert for the head home.
Every living cell on the planet is damned when the whole thing becomes a dead zone.
It really couldn’t get any worse than an asteroid headed for earth.
Nothing left to do but make peace, unless maybe you’re angsty, sweat it and curse.
Panic in the streets as the word gets out, fear stricken kids let out worthless shouts.
No skeptics with concern or doubt cause you can see that rock in the sky burning now.
The globe starts to heat up and tremble, Begins to get beat up, disassembles.
It’s like the rapture only after no one is saved, going to graves, the living surrender.
But this isn’t the end, no. For humans, yes. Our prudent death and who’d have guessed?
A chance for the earth to again give birth when only primordial ooze is left.
And soon, what’s next is truly blessed, as Mother Nature’s tears will flow.
To spring up the first green plants and the world advances like millions of years ago.

I liked this a lot fam. ^ I could really see what you were saying in this. Painted a picture nicely mah dude. Good shit!



A spark starts and shocks me into form, so cocky when I'm born
On the hot seat in some shorts, you better enjoy the calm before the storm
You spit fire? Be honest, I'm the source! Known to take families out of homes
Sending signals in clouds of smoke, only conquered if someone drowns my soul

Damn, this shit was tied together nicely ^

If you didn't before, now you know! Destroy forests, show no remorse for it
Devour any corpses quick, dance eagerly, anxiously ready to torch some shit
Got 'em like "That's fucking hot!" Of course it is! Smoke stacks ask How can you breathe?
This heat rises, pounding ya cheeks til it proceeds past a thousand degrees
Barely make a sound when I sneak through fields and plains as I sweep across states
Forcing people to breathe the heartache while giving new meaning to the phrase eat a hot plate
Believe I stock graves, disregarding any of those feelings you cherish
Natural disasters? I'm still one of merit. By my very hand, millions have perished.

Serious flow right here. ^ i liked this whole piece. the content the vocab the imagery very nice.





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Re: Naturally Disastrous (A Collectively Ill Collab)

Post by Defiance »

Quix- animal rap man shit was good a solid 12 lines my friend.. really enjoyed that, seems like you really grasped the subject good stuff
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so have you realized yet, that maybe I'm Important?? lil misunderstood, might seem Crazy when I Torment??
and if you continue to be Lazy and ignore me ... then I'll continue on my path ... and turn even more babies into orphans

Kau the lion- had real solid flow, like the first bar the most.. a less heady piece but thats good mostly again nailing the subject good shit

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Red light flashing on the red phone, NASA has a red alert for the head home.
Every living cell on the planet is damned when the whole thing becomes a dead zone

KuhlerBlynd: now your style is illy man.. really enjoyed the rhymes and content another dope drop

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If you didn't before, now you know! Destroy forests, show no remorse for it
Devour any corpses quick, dance eagerly, anxiously ready to torch some shit


Overall this was decent.. with a lil room for improvement would have liked to see a disaster story from the different points of views that would have been dope..


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Quix - Nice shit fam.

so respect my potential and send a sign that you do, or its 'even more destruction' just ask people in China for proof
Fav line in the whole drop. feelin this closer

Kau - Dope shit. Proly liked ya verse the most outta all 3. Multies were dope, msg was dope and really like da storytelling

Kuhler - Nice.

You spit fire? Be honest, I'm the source! Known to take families out of homes
Sending signals in clouds of smoke, only conquered if someone drowns my soul

shit was bangin! Dopest bar in ya drop. Really feel n dis shit right hea.

Yall did ya thang wit this piece. Overally nice storytellin and everybody stayed on topic perfectly
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thanks for the feedback.


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