Welcome to Illest Lyrics forum established in 2005.
----
Free Vapes

BITCHY bitches

Drop your written rhymes in one of the largest collections of original rhymes on the internet. The feedback in our Written Rhymes section will simply amaze you.

Moderators: Loon E Lou, Enlightend

Post Reply
User avatar
CBK
Rap Assassin
Offline
Posts: 543
Joined: Fri Mar 25, 2011 6:21 am
Wins: 9
Losses: 18
No Shows: 1
Contact:

BITCHY bitches

Post by CBK »

i need to drain some flows, before my brain explodes
i'm getting sick to death of these written texts
from lames disclosing mail an saying
they've got names t'expose.
shits aimless bro's are you brainless ho's,
this kid is vexed so i'm letting go and raining blows
aimed at those nameless foes
fo wasting posts and fake creating pro's
i'll file a complaint on you,for faking breaking news,and hating dudes
then beat the shit out of you and the cop that you've all got to give a statement to.
quick question? when are you gonna quit the shit spreading before i kick heads in, watch these bitches gettin
a quick lesson in spittin venom with the diss im pennin keyin, fuck it i'm freeing,
it wouldn't surprise me to find,they sit in bedrrooms an devise rumours an lies the most clueless of guys
could find the truths in disguise
im refusing to buy, that these dudes are ACTUALLY guys, truth is they must be unusually bi, or confused in their minds,
because theyr'e more fuckin bitchy than female teenage youths in their prime.
User avatar
Alvin
Sudonim Free
Offline
Posts: 1958
Joined: Wed Nov 24, 2010 6:09 am
Wins: 8
Losses: 3
No Shows: 1
Location: CA

Re: BITCHY bitches

Post by Alvin »

The ending I relate to the most. Its dope shit man. Especially for a free. I know you get downplayed a bit, but that's more of a structure thing IMO. This is pretty cool off the dome. Way to grab the moment by the horns even if some of it was at me.

[ Post made via Android ] Image
Glamtrash
Poetic Juggernaut
Offline
Posts: 1498
Joined: Thu Nov 22, 2007 3:42 pm
Wins: 0
Losses: 0
Location: Where the Treetops Kiss the Stars

Re: BITCHY bitches

Post by Glamtrash »

Right? I've had girlfriends with less drama, and high-maintenance is my type. Your structure is ten fold better than it used to be, but could improve get (yes i know it was just thrown together) Way to let the bullshit inspire you lol.

[ Post made via Android ] Image
User avatar
Kau the Lion
Boobs Indeed
Offline
Posts: 790
Joined: Wed Aug 04, 2010 8:58 pm
Wins: 29
Losses: 10
Location: Chicken Skull
Contact:

Re: BITCHY bitches

Post by Kau the Lion »

Sick flow, man. Multies felt natural and you stayed on topic. Way to keep it relevant, too.
Image
User avatar
COMPUTERCHIPS
Potential Emcee
Offline
Posts: 47
Joined: Sat Mar 05, 2011 6:24 am

Re: BITCHY bitches

Post by COMPUTERCHIPS »

Flow was flawless. Good shit for a key
Shit was relentless.
thanks for posting
Post Reply

Return to “Written Rhymes”

Who is online

Users browsing this forum: No registered users and 2 guests