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[GODBODYTECHNOLOGY]

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-- Fri Nov 25, 2011 3:56 am --

COMANDO AT RENO

-- Fri Nov 25, 2011 7:16 am --

comando at reno.....overmantelin skantillin who illin yo mik checker.swift chess and check mate. paper mate no maid french kiss spanish harlem texas antomims.scrantonins.ontonon...ashanti with the jaunty.....acanthus...poetess...antling to cant do us cant bust so dont do it just do it like us......memo grahms on the mik dont kuss giggarhyms dont fuss don woogie dont adjust just move the mik pressure to do the perianthoath....do not touch the notes on the note book case i just necromantical......on the register keep the hands dont move or budge them equilaisers.....dfo bust them lasors......but the prossesor in my mind.....dont mint a hint dont transcend too equiped......set up and zipped...del monte seven el smoken a frito dip.......sometimes eight to elleven a seven elleven dont sit to trip....got certifications.....so dont blow my wind...when i'm doin my verifications........i'll skill and skrill youll get mad and pop at an apeal with out or with a brand new bad sykologic pill and over deal and kill the honor and the copper.......call it lycanthropy look at you all sippin whippin and pissin that apple peas like you at apple bees....

-- Fri Nov 25, 2011 7:16 am --

comando at reno

[Leeroy Jenkins]

If you hit the enter bar, you can actually break up your lines

like

this.

[MonuMental]

I've got to be completely honest. This shit was the most off the wall, idiotic piece of trash I've ever read, my guy. And I'm normally nice with feed, I can normally look over the inherent flaws of every lyricist in order to allow for the growth of their respective writing styles and room for elevation, but you, sir, have taken it a step too far. Most of those words are used in an incorrect context, or either plain don't exist. I've taken the liberty to cite a few examples below:

a obcerd_ rapper like me means alot of mesembryanthemum,

^^ Misspelled
Mesembryanthemum - (meaning "midday flowering") is a genus of plants native to southern Africa.

Ok, how in the hell does a rapper mean alot of a plant native to Southern Africa? Enlighten me.

Skantillin - Is not a word.


So, back to business. A good deal of your diction in this piece was deplorable. Many of the words that were already misused were also misspelled. Sir, were you sent by the government to anger me? Were you sent here to make me become an alcoholic again? It's working. Seriously, though, dude, the only things I can conclude from reading this jumble of nothingness are 1.) You're some super genius that actually had a super well thought out and hidden message behind this piece of work, or 2.) You just wanted to script something cool, so you looked up a rhyming dictionary and started typing rhyming words with no clear thought as to what they meant or how they should be used. True enough, some of the words could have actually been used to craft an intelligent and solid piece of work. Also, your structure is going to be a big deal to a lot of people. Most of them WILL NOT READ THIS because it's in paragraph form. Just being quite honest. I'm not downing on you for laughs, or disrespecting anyone's craft, I'm just saying write because you have a statement to express or a feeling or emotion to convey, not because you thought a bunch of words sounded good together.

Welcome to IllestLyrics, man, sincerely. Stay with us and elevate. You'll find it priceless, in the end.

P.S. - You'll also need to feed two pieces prior to posting yours and post the links into your pieces. It's the rules.