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Prepetual Force by Weapon Mouth

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Prepetual Force by Weapon Mouth

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This Was Sick...The Flow,Wordplay,Beat...Everything About It....Not Much In Terms Of Feedback But I Personally Felt I Could'nt Criticise This In Anyway
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That second verse was SICK!
[center]And a lot are already sayin that I am the greatest, cuz I get iller as time goes on like a terminal cancer patient![/center]
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Like the horns in the beat - the part a couple lines before "Posieden" was a little rushed but your definitely coming with the abstract multi-syllable flow and for the most part it is very on point ....

This second verse has an interesting filter on it but I'd ease it back a bit ... EQ'ed almost to the point of harsh.

On my first listen I was focused on the "vibe" of the song ... it has a good bounce ... Some of the verses "bulldoze emotion" and multiples are slick ...

Second verse ... very similar to the first in content ... kinda comic bookish ... viseral but not really themed ... I'd like to see you two converge on a single concept and interegrate a hook ...

but you guys definitely compliment each other ... and this is a tight track.
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Thanks for the overall good feedback guys!
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