Hi-Jackked (Bye, Jack)

Enlightend · Post by **Enlightend** » Fri Jun 03, 2011 10:38 am

i was actually feeling this... we should battle some time... anyways some punches was hard, and some played... flow was eehh... but its a battle verse so thats ok....

JDR · Post by **JDR** » Fri Oct 28, 2011 10:51 pm

Better late than never? I got you and will post something up later. Proper feed later too.

Quix · Post by **Quix** » Fri Oct 28, 2011 11:18 pm

Wuddup Jack, its been a minute!!

K KiLLaH · Post by **K KiLLaH** » Sat Oct 29, 2011 12:38 am

yo imo from my personal experience from battling JDR .... he would ate this verse n spit it in ya face...you gotta come harder take scotts advice

88SkyLink · Post by **88SkyLink** » Sat Oct 29, 2011 5:16 am

This was actually a dope diss to Jack but its certainly not the greatest ever. You had some good and creative punches but you were playing the Jack concept too much. The only thing that stood out was the nameplay. I didn't see that much personals aswell, so it didn't give that much effect. All in all it was good verse but I can still see some room for improvement .. keep it up man

Kuhlerblynd · Post by **Kuhlerblynd** » Sat Oct 29, 2011 1:16 pm

Thanks for the feed.

This WAS posted quite a few months ago lol. I dont think I would write anything like this now.

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