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M33Kish
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211 (HOT FIYA!)

Post by M33Kish »

YO YO YO, this is jer boi (your boy) MEEKISH!!!! Back with some hot fiya!!! This is a track I did with my group infinite hype commin from san jose californiyay. check out this track for me and gimme some feedback!!!
(Im 4th verse)

http://youtu.be/DPwIckVqcGc
The Meek Shall Prosper... So they say :P
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Re: 211 (HOT FIYA!)

Post by Omnie »

Everyone rode the beat well, amazingly, I should say...flow, multies and more multies, thumbs up...beat had my head nodding...dope lines!!!

Props homie!!!

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Re: 211 (HOT FIYA!)

Post by TreTru »

1st guy..flo's decent , deliv aight, scheme was kinda cool

Hook..was eh it fit ..made it seem like jus a cypher track imo..

2nd guy... like his deliv a lil more..he's smooth but keeps a strong presence..sounds Clearer announciation

3rd Guy..lyrical 4 sure..schemes a lil more intricate..seems in line tho..a lil werk on da presence tho imo..no hate on that..

4th..idk Meek i think im used to you, but the swag is coo man..sounds Natural not read-e at all real smooth..kinda a lil andre' ish .. wich is a good thing imo...

5th verse?..this guy has an old school Voice..haha his was aight too bruh..

all in all this was a decent Track..the beat was old school kinda early 90's imo... Good shyt bro...
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