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I Can't Take It

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Walking through the hallways, mocked and called names
I laugh and walk away, it's kinda hard to explain
I gave em all more than just an arm and a leg
And It was stupid...thinking it would get me some friends
But I was foolish...Figures, they just left me and picked
As I'm exempt from the clique
Gave yall my lunch money
So you could buy a fucking cookie
Alone again, I'm writing songs and shit
As I often think
Of how great life would be as the popular kid
Or if I ain't talk with a lisp, then think how awesome I'd get
I restrain from emotions
cause when I'm angry tears flow quick
and their eyes will glare
as my pride is smeared
I just hide the fear, smile like I don't care
Despite what I feel
Hoping life will just end
Cause I don't wanna fight, it's a sin
But I'm tempted to stick a knife in this bitch

everybody always stares at me
pushing me around yet I sing merrily
but when it goes from shove to hit
I've had enough of it, I can't take it
everybody always stares at me
pushing me around yet I sing merrily
but when it goes from shove to hit
I've had enough of it, I can't take it

I get pushed and played with, look man face it
Fuck that gay shit, need a fucking translation?
I refuse to fight, I just can't take it
"Ooh! he's tight! just cause he's trynna punch his lights out!"
For no reason, just to control beefin
On both hands kneelin, only god in my corner
he won't fight for me, so I get mocked as a loser
cause I don't drop him and do this
and punch him, knocking him toothless
Call me a pussy? bitch it's harder to restrain
Imagine if some bitch got up in your face
Could you be walkin away? Fuck nah
Got you under pressure, trynna look cool
But in God's eyes, you're a fool
Trynna keep your reputation in a fucking high school
How pathetic are you?
When it comes full circle, what you think you're gonna do?
Exactly, nothing...game over, you lose

everybody always stares at me
pushing me around yet I sing merrily
but when it goes from shove to hit
I've had enough of it, I can't take it
I'ma take it....yeah, I'ma take it
Alan spoke in class today...

Blood running down my face
(Say your prayers motherfucker!)
Struggling to catch my breath
as the sweat drips down my chest
Ribs crack and the crowd clears
I drown in my tears
I lie unnoticed, choking, motionless
So I drag myself home and I pull out a gun
I've had enough
FUCK YOU GOD! GO TO HELL YOURSELF, BITCH
I got a nine and held it, I cock it and think
My clock rings at six
I'm walking to class, I got a gun in the bag
I ain't frontin I'm back to put an end to this fag
The bell rings, schools out and the glock comes out
As I aimed, I pulled, and shot his ass down
Causing mayhem and massacre
Went into the principals office and stuck the gat to her
Prom queen shot down
BITCH YOU AIN'T SO HOT NOW
Everybody better DUCK THE FUCK DOWN
Bitch I'm on a RAMPAGE and this is YOUR FAULT
AND YOU'RE ALL GONE GET WHAT'S COMING TO YA
All the voices echo in my head
BITCH SHUT THE FUCK UP
I ain't do shit to start shit
I do it to END SHIT
Blast ALL you faggots to the 5th dimension
Cops finally arrive
Handcuff me, but it feels so good inside
Finally out of my head, out of my mind

everybody always stares at me
pushing me around yet I sing merrily
but when it goes from shove to hit
I've had enough of it, I can't take it
I'ma take it....yeah, I'ma take it
Alan spoke in class today...
everybody always stares at me
pushing me around yet I sing merrily
but when it goes from shove to hit
I've had enough of it, I can't take it
I'ma take it....yeah, I'ma take it
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Re: I Can't Take It

Post by Mic S »

i was digging this track
flow was on point - delivery was dope - emotion was good. storytellin was awesome on this track - hook was cool n different - lyrics were there
message was clear throughout nd u stuck to the topic
i like how u ended it as well
overall u went in on this track... lol talk bout some columbine shit
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Re: I Can't Take It

Post by M33Kish »

FUCKIN DOPE!!! this was a hot fuckin storyline bro, real deep emotion in it. the hook was pretty hot fiya too, i think its awesome you can sing on your tracks. Major props too, you followed through on the concept beginning to a very nice ending.

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