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-MenaCe- Diss... Battle He Ducked

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-MenaCe- Diss... Battle He Ducked

Post by Enlightend »

OK so since MenaCe decided to CALL ME OUT... BE A BITCH... THEN NOT SHOW UP
i will post this for feedback...


i read his past battles, an i get the feelin that this kid menace is LESS THEN ILLIN
so i wont bring the PANE(pain)!!!! but 'i still draw a WIN-THOUGH'(window).. 'PEN-A-SILL-IN'(penicillin)

cuz im a SURGEON dropping greatness, and POUNDIN ON UR CHEST cause i just LOST MY PATIENTS
now my OBSERVATION is these punches finna leave ya FACE LIT UP like im PLAYING OPERATION

yur bout to get a loss, and this will get a crossed the fact ur wack and SO U BETTER STOP
although im going easy instead of hard, cause just FLASHES OF HEAT is enough make MENA-PAUSE(menopause)

so why try an rap its CLEAR son, only way u DISS-A-PEER(disappear), is like a FAT CHICKS TAMPON
immaculate and metaphoric, thats a pair-a-lies(paralyze)... in fact ur come-BACKS BEEN SLAMMED ON

cus he isnt touchin my skill, yep MenaCe aint FUCKIN COME-ILL(Camille) if he was KELSIE GRAMMER
so tell um dont press me fam cause im so LEGIT he CANT TOUCH THIS, yeah i LEAVE MC HAMMERED

DEATH BY-KEY(BI-KE) on ur headstone after u try an HANDLE THESE BARS as they get thrown at ya
even his record confirms L's ARE RIGHT for this bastard like ur WEARIN YA HEADPHONES BACKWARD!!!
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Re: -MenaCe- Diss... Battle He Ducked

Post by Defiance »

ill man nice usage of word play.. good punches.. a couple forced ones

but over all a solid drop.. would of liked to see menace drop.. dudes got some talent too..

but over all i liked it, a nice battle verse

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Re: -MenaCe- Diss... Battle He Ducked

Post by Alvin »

Pretty solid man, overall. Never really gone over much of menaces shit to see if its enough, but this could whoop my ass, so thumbs up fucker.
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