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Just joined and really impressed with the talent here.

I'm 31, been writing for 20, recording for 6. Made a hip-hop album in 2008, gonna record a acoustic vocal one here soon. I love to rhyme though ... so I'm putting a mixtape together as well.

I think I'm a bit older than most ya'll ... I've never made a dime with music but I hope you guys get as much enjoyment out of it as I do ...
Regardless

This beat is from Kid Cudi's - "Cleveland is the Reason"

Thanks for giving it a spin!
Any feed is appreciated. ;)

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well you definately come in with the smoothness.

damn man, your 31? i mean that in all positiveness cus your style and delivery seem pretty polished. i like your presence man. you seem extremely comfortable behind that mic. 120 horses in somethin that size. haha. the hook is fresh man. ziplock fresh. haha. really diggin this man. production is on point mos def. crystal clear. i like the single take verses. ive been doin that alot also. jus makes the verses sound crisper i think. if you stick around man, alotta the audio heads here can benefit from your wisdom and skill. nice drop, hope to hear more from ya man. :clap:


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hmm im on my Werk Comp right now so i cant hear it but i def will feed this 2nite when i get home...it's definately
good to get some new blood around here and by the looks of ya feed you probly know what ya doin..i'll def peep this out later and return the feed bruh...

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dude this was ill.. slick delivery and flow.. great quality too

like the whole storyline of it the whole treating my probe like a cadilac line was ill


welcome to illest man and thanks for the feed on my drops
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nice shit bruh ...

Delivery and Presence are on bruh...

the Rhymescheme sounds pretty ill..lyrics too

im likin the vibe..bruh ya deliv and presence are strong imo...

well i wouldnt think youd wanna change this one bruh...good stuff...welcome to illest Lyrics.com..
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First Time I Hit The Booth In A long Time And I Come Across This!! Dude Love It Flow Delivery Etc All On Point....Keep Doing Whst You Do
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This is real smooth man... im liking the vibe this gives... And man i can tell the years of experience behind your vocals.. with the confidence and the way you deliver... The hook is pretty awesome liking the harmony.. Def becoming a fan
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Do you use pro tools? Your quality is impeccable.


Far as the flow and lyrics and presence etc...everyone else already covered it...dope shit
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Don't have pro-tools.

I have a entry level B1 condensor microphone, a two channel mixer, and a dedicated soundcard. I mix with Adobe Audition condensing and maximixing with "Waves" plugins.

If you want more specifics I'm more than happy to share.

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Damn a condenser mic? Everyone always told me to go unidirectional...i'll have to look into that! I'll def be comin to you for advice on quality, cuz that's really all my audios are lacking, that crisp clarity...I'm still fuckin wit CEP2 til I get the pro tools this christmas
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I'm always pleased coming into the chamber (opps...the booth) and finding someone new that can really lay it down. Cyan, I have to say, welcome to illest...I'm 30yrs old myself and have released 7 CD's in the past 6 yrs that I've been doing music. I like your flow and structure...it's misleading and unpredictable...it doesn't have a "common" sound to it. You're very polished in your style and your choice of productions to meet your concepts seem to be up to par. You enunciate clearly, your presentation is clean, no major complaints from me on the mixing. Excellent drop...I give this a 9.5/10 ...definitely hope to hear more you here on this site. I've been here for 5 yrs...so hopefully you stick around and enjoy.
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